Reviews for Saria's Desires
The Pilot chapter 5 . 5/28/2003
Nice developmental chapter. Very good on the descriptions, and the settings.

Yes, I think an antagonist should be brought in, as it always makes things more interesting. Now, who to bring in...Hey, I have an idea. Okay, Saria is not a Kokiri anymore, so that means that she won't be staying in the Forest Temple, ergo the magic seal on the dark realm will be weakened, allowing a little of Ganondorf's power to come through. And who better to be the bad guy, than everyone's favorite; Dark Link! Or, you could introduce a new character, like, say, a sorceress, who was one of Ganondorf's allies, or maybe a child of Ganondorf's, bent on revenge. Also, said bad guy, or bad guys, could kidnap Zelda in an attempt to get Link to come to them, where a trap has been set. Saria should continue to grow up, and learn how to fight, so she can play an active role in the rescue. Well, that's about all I can think of right now. I hope it helps you out, and nice job on this chapter!
Golden Fighter chapter 5 . 5/27/2003
It's not much to say, but... I really liked it! Please keep up a good work!
Tini-angel chapter 4 . 3/20/2003
Hey, this is really good. I can't help you out right now, but it looks like some of your readers have a few ideas. Please write some more...
Kattz Maricle chapter 4 . 12/16/2002
Hey, when are you going to finish this up? Just another chapter added would make me happy. Why make me happy? Well, there's no real reason, actually, or maybe it's just because this story is turning out so damn good!
The Pilot chapter 4 . 8/8/2002
Well, I'll try to think of some more ideas, but for now, how about these? How about if Saria was chosen for a quest? Say she had to find a magical item that would lock Ganon away forever. Or, she had to help Link defeat a new evil. Or, she could learn the ways of the Gerudo, and protect the forest? I would recommend that she grows up to Link's age though, so she has a chance to win his affection. Hope these ideas help you, and good job on the chapter.
Neo-Shadow chapter 4 . 8/8/2002
MORE! Just kiddin'. It's a good fic. I would love to see more.
The Pilot chapter 3 . 6/14/2002
How about if Saria arrives at LonLon Ranch next? She could become friends with Malon. Then, you could have Link show up at the ranch when Saria is there; His reaction to her being outside the forest would be interesting. Also, is Saria going to physically grow up, so she can compete for Link's affection? This story has some real potential. Keep it up, and I hope these ideas help.
Neo-Shadow chapter 1 . 5/26/2002
when are you going to add a new chapter. this is starting to get good
Link chapter 3 . 4/11/2002
great story!
Link chapter 3 . 4/11/2002
great story!
christian chapter 1 . 4/10/2002
that was a'ight
christian chapter 1 . 4/10/2002
that was a'ight
nagami cabasa chapter 3 . 4/9/2002
Yay! Good story! Excuse me while I add this to my favs!
Ami Metallium chapter 2 . 3/17/2002
More... More...
Ryoko-San chapter 2 . 2/27/2002
Excellent! I loved your story, PLEASE continue! You have some talent. _
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