Reviews for After death
Kesshi Uzumaki chapter 1 . 6/12
First things first, can you provide a link to the sequel of After Death. With that outta the way I'd like to ask a favor. Would you mind doing a commission for me?
It'd take place primarily in Naruto's world. The crossover would be with Fairy Tail and Bleach. I was thinking of a harem fanfic. Naruto's heritage is revealed, with him being the child of Minato and Kushina, and the grandchild of Tsunade and Jiraiya, and the great grandchild of Hashirama and Mito. Now, I was thinking of adding additional teams to Konoha. Team Rin and Team Yoruichi. Team Rin would comprise of Rangiku as a wind style user (like Naruto), Tier Halibel as a water style user, and Rukia with a ice style Kekkei Genkai (and the younger sister of Haku, who will also be a girl). Team Yoruichi will comprise of Erza as a fire style user, Mirajane as a Jinchuuriki, and Anko.
Also, Rin would be alive cuz she is saved by Kumo's Ay and Killer Bee and returned to Konoha to secure an alliance. The alliance would also secure a marriage contract between Naruto and Samui and Yugito. Or one or the other. Your choice.
Im not very particular with the pairings but I do want NaruSaku. You can add Hinata into the harem, just not as the main girl in Naruto's harem. You can choose Naruto's new jutsu, attire, etc. You can also choose any alternate events you may come up with. Sakura and Sasuke bashing is okay, as long as it only happens before Naruto's heritage is revealed. I really hope you take me up on this idea.
Im so done chapter 8 . 5/14
This isnt a flame this is straight up honesty, either english is your second language are your a tard, the way you structure your chapters and the way you type some sentences pisses me off with how poorly its done, and half of your translations weither simple as fuck or not are stupidly wrong, and another thin g i fucking hate is when writers put 'he' when their talking about a fucking girl! Its 'she' for female and 'he' for male. Get that sort of simple shit right before posting a fucking chapter again.
Tsuna97 chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
aww how sad the beginning was, but it was great later! i love it already :3 Keep up the good work! ;D
malkallan chapter 3 . 6/16/2014
go on it kenpachi sama
malkallan chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
heeeeeey his zanpakutou is the tensha zangetsu?
Drewdragon chapter 6 . 6/21/2013
the motherly Kurosaki twin's name is Yuzu and the tomboy twin is Karin.
Tirion Fordring chapter 2 . 5/26/2011
"...Repute yourself fortunate. I think she likes you."

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Remember how much she "likes" Byakuya? IF it's anything like that, then I think i would prefer her not liking me, because then i could just avoid her so she doesn't munch on my head...
narutodekenzieboy chapter 12 . 1/22/2011
-Drooling at Hanataro,Naruto and Sajin Bankai-

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omally-dood chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
y the same as ichigos y not do something different like a sword the same length as sephiroth's
avatoa chapter 6 . 1/11/2010
Ichigo's sister name is Yuzu, not Chizuru. That's the chick with red hair and glasses they left at the bar.
avatoa chapter 4 . 1/11/2010
Wait a minute. I thought you said earlier in the chapter that the 12th Division wouldn't be entering anyone yet one of the two competitors who use Shikai in the tournament is from the 12th division. What's up with that?
HikariNoTenshi-San chapter 18 . 10/16/2009
Glad you finished and um THIS WAS SO KICK ASS I LOVED IT! XD
BlackRoseFire chapter 17 . 9/30/2009
Awesome story. I can't wait to read the next one. I do like Nemu and hate Miyuri.
daek chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Just from the fucking beggining is a fail. Naruto dying like a bitch thinking of the promise he made to that whore and still worried about that filthy weakling of Uchiha. What is worse, HE'S STILL A FUCKING WEAKLING. THIS SHIT FAILS
ZMiDnIgHtSuNz chapter 9 . 7/29/2009
Every time i read this i wonder why you don't make naruto use his ninja abilities?
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