Reviews for Dissonance
P chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
It looks as if your dividers didn't show up, the story seemed to bounce from one person to the other without something to indicate POV change. it was hard to catch on to when it changed, you see- it made it hard to follow. but, that's my only complaint. funniest misunderstanding eveeeeerrrr hhehe
panictowel chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
hrhr, nice one. (I didn't want to tell you that this could do well with a sequel, but I failed), very entertaining and well written, I really enjoyed reading this D

gonna brows through your other stories now, i like the style from this one
MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
That was really different and really funny. Excellent job!
aSqueeintheDistance chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
. !
aradonai chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
hah. wow. Very nice! That was pretty funny.
E. Anthony chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
I loved this. :)

It's 9:17 on Sunday morning (happy Easter, by the way), so I'm stuck to writing one-liners in an attempt to engage my brain. LoL.

What-Happens chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
This was great I think you should continue but that's just me :) lol well it was funny I think I liked it a lot keep up the greaat work, I added the story to my favorites :)
LillianLockhart chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Haha, I really enjoyed this piece! It was very funny and I like the use of the mirrors. Brava!