Reviews for Maybe Something More
jeannetaylor79 chapter 7 . 1/25
You know what. Screw the critics. If they want perfection then tell them to write some fan fiction and you can critique theirs. Anyroad no one needs perfection unless a million dollars is being earned with it and I'm sure that JK would not be happy at all as that would be construed to be plagiarism . I love your work cause I feel the things you are writing about. I was an English major in school. We don't need that in fanfiction. All we need is a good story and down to earth writing. Take care and ignore the prats. I LIKE YOUR WORK!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/27/2017
I love this idea so far, but hopefully Annie doesn't become all superpowered. I hope we get to see Harry as a teacher!
Netchka chapter 14 . 4/15/2017
Love it. Something totally different. Need more stories like this.
Guest chapter 14 . 4/1/2016
Hey this is awesome. I am impressed.
david chapter 7 . 3/2/2016
Personally I think this story is good so far?
If people want to nit pic as you put it.
Tell them to shut up or go find another story to read?
Guest chapter 7 . 11/2/2013
Nope, he just let it go after a moment. At least something along the lines of, I will work with you for Annie and do anything for her, but I will not forgive you so easily. Based on this, Hermione, Remus, and Tonks will also get off easy. Something like this has the potential to ruin life long friendships. She played the he wasn't fit to be a parent card, he countered and she goes on about how to raise her child? He has every right to tell her how to raise THEIR child. This story had great potential, but with how things are going, it won't play out in reasonable manner.

Good writing though. Just don't agree with the story ark.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/2/2013
Well at least Harry is pissed. I really hope he doesn't just let it go though. Even Tonks and Lupin saying Ginny did the right thing and still not say anything to him. Even if it was the right thing to do when Harry was still dealing with the after effects of the war. What about a few years later, 5 years later, NOW?! It doesn't make sense from a moral standpoint and is not only wrong, but out of character. Remus, of all people, couldn't live with himself if he was keeping something so important from Harry.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
I'm not liking how much, and how easy she is finding it to do, Hermione is betraying Harry. Doesn't fit her personality at All. Stories where they keep the knowledge away from the father are interesting and terrible at the same time. To hide something like that from someone is one of the worst things someone can do. I hope you portray Harry adequately upset, especially with his personality, when he finds out.
I'm-Too-Insane chapter 14 . 2/25/2013
it was very cute! :)
Shanaia-on -Wings -of-Freedom chapter 14 . 10/19/2012
nice story...3
Blueteeth chapter 14 . 9/8/2012
Very good. I really enjoyed reaading this, and I thought it was quite an original plot, which is nice to find. My only note is that in chapter 13, you say "Harry's team lost 752-4". As in Quidditch, you get 10 points for eveery goal, and 150 points when catching the snitch, there is no way he score could have been 752-4.
darians-enemy chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
For reasons unknown, the older stories are still the best, and you have to admit there's a lot of crap out there now.

I'm glad I found this and can settle back for good read!
A Reader chapter 14 . 3/4/2012
This is a really amazing story.
Bill Parrott chapter 14 . 12/26/2011
I havent made any comments on earlir chapters I have truley enjoyed reading this I thought it very stimulating and amusing

Thanks for the writing

Thirst4light chapter 11 . 12/5/2011
hey,I really don't want be skeptical but your fic had few you had stopped writing because of some harsh criticisms,I just wanted to say criticisms will help you develop from an amateur writer to a real good one as long as you take it constructively.

Just a well on writing.
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