|Reviews for When It Comes to Harry|
| Samantha chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
That's cool. Very good. And it makes sense.
| karma11 chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
that was so awesome i totally loved it sweet and realistic!
| Norbet chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Great ending! Great story too, good job!
| Catchy Pen Name chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
It was very interesting reading everything through Ginny's eyes, and I think you were clever with it. She's such a little bantam at heart, isnt she?
| Bluu3 chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
Ah I loved this. D Ginny's character was very-well displayed...and I love how you were able to incorporate her memories in without actually referring to the books. I also love how you incorporated those thoughts of young people...like being invincible. ] I really enjoyed reading this...especially because I am a fan of Harry/Ginny. And those last lines...well, not completely original, but it fit well, and I liked it. I'm always influenced by the beginning and the ending of a piece/story, and I loved the imagery where she would close her eyes and fall (undoubtedly trusting Harry), and he would catch her. I loved reading this. Thank you; it made my day.
| lala land chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
that was absolutely delectable! lol
I really liked the end, so beautiful!
constructive critism, right. well, you shiftes tenses a bit, and there were a few grammer mistakes..but that's about it..
I liked how you mixed cannon into it without using quotes from the books D I like Ginny, and i don't like how there's hardly any character development for her in the books... but you did a fine job of that
Please write more on Ginny D
| HeathroBonk chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
"Harry was worth getting hurt and taking risks for."
How could you of all people write that? Freak. I liked it anyway though even with the blatant Bright Eyes rip offs.
| Black is the New Pink chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Klent...you didn't let me beta...EVIL.
Twas good. I really liked this one... there was a few there, the sentences...but other than that. Nice job!
I'll be sobbing quietly in the corner...but good story. hehehehehehe. See you tomorrow for MATH TEAM!
| theKRITIC chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Lovely job. It's sweet...I'm reffering this to a friend who loves fairy tales. I think she'll love it as much as I did.