Reviews for Boba Fett's Lament
Ki chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
I like the storyline it is very good but it would be better if you updated it.
Miba chapter 1 . 1/11/2002
This is good, but a little out dated. For one thing, Boba has black hair (dont believe me? Check a pic of Daniel Logan.) and he was never Journyman Protector because he was never Jaster Mereel. But for the sake of the story, it was very cool and I'll definetly read the next chapters. But I think you need to work a little on your present and past tenses, it gets a bit confusing here and there.
Ursula chapter 1 . 10/11/2001
Wow...a sad tale. Easy to understand why he takes the armor after such a loss.
Ricco chapter 1 . 5/10/2001
Hey! Cool story so far! I'll be looking for new chapters later!
Kiara1 chapter 1 . 5/9/2001
The story has a good plot, but it seems to move a little too fast and it has a tendency to be choppy. To avoid that,for example, take the first two lines of your story and combine them in a sentence like, "The sun beat down on the planet of Concord Dawn as a celebration rang in the usually quiet city," instead of breaking it up into two separate sentences. You'll find it flows a little better...just be careful you don't make them into run-on sentences. :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
Ilona chapter 1 . 5/8/2001
Hmm...not bad so far. Weird spellings. Britsh, Australian? I dunno. I need some sleep. Next part please.
Mr. Fett chapter 1 . 5/7/2001
I like it it's good.