Reviews for Parallels
Thedevilsangel chapter 1 . 9/23/2015
I know this review is pretty late, but these two are my OTP and I love YAOI fabrics about them. And the way you wrote and explained their love and passionate night spent in each others arms.I absolutely loved your fanfiction!
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
nicely done, i loved the metaphors between Sasuke Gaara and Naruto, it's true Sasuke always was on the same track but going the opposite way always meant to collide
ShadesofStrange chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
OMG! You write so beautifully 3
Nikuman-Dango chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Thank you. Thank you for creating such an amazing, realistic... fantastic story. I love this pairing, it's perfect, and you just related my every thought of this pairing on this one page; Their co-existence, the depth of explanation of Naruto's relation with Sasuke, your timing of drama... and even the interactions in their minds was perfect. You are amazing, and I hope that someday I too will be able to convey the simple underlays like this. I hope you write more of these, they are beautiful.
Gaaras-Gothic-Ninja-Sappy-Sue chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Oh boy, here comes the tears. That was too beautiful. You have a wonderful way with words.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
2b0rlee chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
that...I can't even describe how beautiful that was
aliendroid chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Wow. Just wow. This
Liz Night chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
This was absoulutely gorgeous! I loved it.
Pr10 lover of Yaoi chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
AWESUMMM! man that was great. Now youve got talent! :) Pure awesommness.
The Raven and the Fox chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Can't say I'm a huge fan of GaaNaru, but I love the concepts you touched on. I especially liked the tree metaphor.

There's something about your writing style that seems so serene and peaceful. I like the long, winding sentences and your descriptive vocabulary. You write like poetry. Prosetry, I guess.
I-rideamorgan chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
This was beautiful beyond words. Thank-you.
xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Wow, this was great.

I was speachless at the end.

Well done, keep up the great work
TenshiXXX chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Just...beautiful. Simply and absolutely.
KyoxSakiFan chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
This...was so damn beautiful. Like, there isn't any words to describe how amazing this was, but I will try anyway cause I'm a sap.

First of all, it was IC. I was happy to see this.

Second, although it was short, it held so much. You didn't hold back. You described much. I also love your overall writing style. It's deep without being too deep; on the borderline between simple and deep. I like that.

Also, I love the ending. It was amazing. And I love how you used the term, 'Making Love' instead of 'sex'. Really, I don't believe these two would be the type to just jump each other for 'sex'. Making love is a more appropriate term to use for them, as it is highly likely that they would refer to it that way themselves.

This is an amazing one-shot. I greatly encourage you to write some more.
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