Reviews for Presently Untitled
Vinyaya chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Ah! Long version of this, PLEASE!
King Cheetah chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
I disagree, this is a FINE story! _ Looking forward to the next chapter!

Your humble servant,

King Cheetah
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
Nice story. Excellent interaction between all the characters. Great flashback scene.

Keep the good writing.
Pointy Objects chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
By all means, continue (if that was your intention), this is really nice. I like how the story started out, and then details were slowly filtered in; not everything was revealed right away. And Arnold's retort to helga, very genius. Hope to see more fo this!