|Reviews for White|
| caelestis-wolf chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
I like it. It's a great show of brotherly love. You need to fix the formating and grammar pronto though. I wish you would put up a link somewhere to the pic that inspired you. I wanna see it ;_;
| scarlet chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
I like your writing style and this was nice to read..
The only problem I noticed would be your formating..
It's not very user friendly.. I reccomend more paragraphs and returns.
| Tandy chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
wow, very angsty. But very IC, IMO, it's just awesome, the way you portray Milliardo, loving and protecting Relena, bordering on obssession. Great Job.