Reviews for Asphodel
riverrat chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
This story is so good!
Poor miserable, lonely Severus basically buried his soul so he wouldn't break on all the guilt and emotions he has balled up inside him.
Aoife Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Woah. I'm not much a fan of second-person writing, but this was great. I love the combination of poetry, judgement, and potions. It's truly a wonderful blend you mixed here.
harrypotterislife chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Very good story. It is well written and conveys the emotion very nicely.
Amscray chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
"There should be a special level of Tartarus for this pus-sucking, gangrenous malignancy of a mental amoeba." - John Munch

"Did somebody steal your parking space again?" - Capt. Donald Cragen

[Trying to prosecute Black and Potter]

"I'm playing legal tiddlywinks with these punks. What I'd really like to do is take them out to Battery Park and hang them by the scrotum."- Jack McCoy

"Men are basically smart or dumb and lazy or ambitious. The dumb and ambitious ones are dangerous and I get rid of them. The dumb and lazy ones I give mundane duties. The smart ambitious ones I put on my staff. The smart and lazy ones I make my commanders." - Erwin Rommel

"I know I'm a real asset." - Potter

"You're only off by two letters."- Severus Snape

A decent story you've written there. I still say Lily was under the Imperious Curse. There's no way she'd fall in love with that scumbag Potter.

Keep up the good work. Severus/Lily forever; Potter/Lily never.

Ja Ne
Random-Musings chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
Christ, I am absolutely speechless. That is probably one of the best Snape-Lily fics I've read. It was beautifully structured and you really captured Snape's character. Ugh, I don't know what to say. You have no idea how much I wish you would continue this or make a spinoff fic or SOMETHING.

Perfect. I'm definately adding this to my favorites and will show it off to anyone who'll listen. 8D