Reviews for If you were to ask, If someone was to know
gummy b3ars chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
So beautiful!
yourtypicalpsycho chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
so sweet.
Demonddancer chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
this is vey good. i like who you are narrating and interacting with the characters at the same time.

-Avalon Rose
Zed of Vesper chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
while I am not sure if you did this for effect but your tenses seem to be all messed up in the begginning:

If you !was (should be were) to ask what Hyuga Hinata is like you might be waiting a long time for the answer, because no knows what she is like.

Hyuga Neji, her cousin, ! use (should be used) to know, before his father, Hyuga Hizashi, was killed.

Now I am not sure since my HENGLISH(inside joke if you get this your from canada) is abyssimal but anyway.

Apart that cute little story :)
blackwolf0925 chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
This is sweet I really like this please update.
Uzamaki-Girl chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
This story was great. Loved the POV you put it in. update soon.
Kenji Star chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
It was good...to a point. The story itself flowed well, but you seem to have some trouble with mechanics. For example, the first line should have read, "If you 'were' to ask..." But yeah, other than that its cool
CrazyGirlofManyNames chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
Great!