Reviews for Past Forgotten
Crimsonlotus159 chapter 2 . 5/15/2009
that waz intresting...but...the flashback waz kinda confusing
Pandora-69 chapter 2 . 7/30/2006
You HAVE to update soon! I really like this fanfic, it has an awesome plot.
angelofshadows chapter 2 . 3/29/2006
all i can say is wow. its well developed so far and at the moment i cant think of mutch more that needs to be added. keep up the grate work and please update soon im dieing to read more
Haru-Lover09 chapter 2 . 2/27/2006
Very good, where is the rest
xbr0ker chapter 2 . 2/26/2006
Really liked and if you want i wouldn't mind you putting one of my charcters in your story ( note first chapter)

Starland: Indian, calm, strong and a fighter. She is 16, wears hair in a brade, darks brown eyes ( almost black) and black silky hair.

if you have any questions just let me know, and please add more soon love your story lol _
mistude chapter 2 . 2/22/2006
hehe im reviewing myself
freezy-hotty chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
I liked it, please update soon.
funkyjazzcat chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
Interesting. It seem a little juvenile, although the plot is good. I'm interested in seeing the next chapter. Work on your punctuation and see if you can't revise this sentance: Closing my book I turned and started up the stairs to my room, right next to Gabriel’s main chamber. I still didn’t understand why the hell he had bought me, I am not obedient, and do not take bull-shit at all, plus I refused to listen to people who tried to “educate” me. Stepping into the bathroom I turn on the shower and began to strip. Also, you want to make sure you are staying in the same tense.
Majestically Mystical chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
Wow... odd... sort of... but... I uh... liked it... I think...

No, I LIKED it. Okay. But, you should have some kind of mark for a new chapter. Yeah... Okay...

Wannabanauthor chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
i love this story! please continue!