|Reviews for PetraSplit|
| A9gX4 chapter 1 . 9/2/2018
| ohgodwhydidimakethis chapter 4 . 6/19/2010
OMG BEST STORY EVER! Thanks for updating!
| ohgodwhydidimakethis chapter 3 . 12/9/2009
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG that was AWESOME! I can't wait to read what happens next! Also, thanks for updating.
| Jessica chapter 2 . 11/29/2009
I don't care if it's liked by multiple people, or if I'm the only person who likes it. Just extend it and stop torturing your awesome readers!
| FairyVampire chapter 2 . 6/27/2009
i am very interested to see where this goes and am happy to find a well written shadow series fic.
| ohgodwhydidimakethis chapter 2 . 6/21/2009
It's about time you updated! It's been THREE YEARS since you published this! I liked this chapter and want more!
| ohgodwhydidimakethis chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
WRITE MORE CHAPTERS WRITE MORE CHAPTERS WRITE MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! DON'T KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE! THAT WOULD BE CRUEL!
| Feline Monstrosity chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
It was a little too fast paced for my liking, there should have been a little more space after she kills Achilles. I would also have found it a little more credible if she had killed him the way she attacks him in the book. You need to put a little more time into explaining things and perhaps a little of petra's character rather than just all-out action. Also there's quite a few typos you could have fixed. I also didn't like the fact that you wrote it in the present tense, but that's just me.
I do like the concept however and I liked some little phrases such as "Petra freezes like a deer caught in the headlights". Keep writing!
| SilverGryphin chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
my only complaints with this are gramatical and such. a couple typos, a couple awkwardly worded phrases, and a couple tense mix-ups. nothing too major though. the kind of thing id do actually.
but very interesting concept. id like to see what you can do with this. keep writing!