Great job on this!

This is great! I felt like I was really there with Kaoru!

I liked this!

this was so wonderful.

And maybe researching about the word isn't such a good thing. Curse my sudden bout of Chitanda Eru. I don't think I'll be able to sleep while thinking of Ju-On (The Grudge) of all the damnable things to remember.

But if nothing else, Kenshin is still Kenshin. And Kaoru is still Kaoru

wow!

This was wonderful! Thank you for sharing!

Now if only this story spanned a few chapters rather than one...

This was a great story; short and to the point. You did a great job of communicating Kaoru's character through her actions. I didn't get much of that from Kenshin, but I suppose that's due to the story being from Kaoru's point of view. It would have been nice to see Kaoru learn more of his character through more meetings.

Anyway, I'm glad I read this!

Kaori & Kenshin.
Human & Ghost.

Ain't it bittersweet? TToTT

Did he materialized into a human being then? And make them human & human?

*applauds*

Author-san,
0_0. Oh. My. Goodness. *waves arms in the air in a manner reminiscent of noodles* That was AMAZING! And EPIC!

I loved it, and can't wait to read more from you! You describe things so well; it really felt like I was there with Kaoru.

Take care, and may God bless you,

Meiyo

That was very cute. I love your writing.

This was nicely written and was very easy to fallow which was nice since I'm reading this half asleep xD. I liked the fact that in the end he was able to come back into this reality because she needed his help and wanted him there _

aww! this was super cute! and i loved the suspense! bravo! :D

Im not exactly sure what it is about this fic but I loved it to the point of making it a fav of minesxD