|Reviews for Losing Sleep|
| muttjc2003 chapter 1 . 3/30
I like this story. It is well written.
| Donni chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
Oh, this gives me sweet heartache
| XxgirlblunderxX chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
Omg i loved the end tho...the ideas of why there losing sleep...~2~ wierd wiggleing eyebrowface :~
| HoneyandPeanutbutterSammiches chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
That was BEAUTIFUL! Someone should make a doujinshi out of this it's so amazing! \(*0*)/
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Ah... This was unexpected...
I didn't expecting this...
This is nice...! :)
| LovegoodH chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
oh the fluff im blushing!
| FollowThisRhythm chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
This is wonderful. The idea – the theme – of this piece is lovely in itself, but even more, your execution of it’s so moving; your writing (for the most part) keen but dreamlike, astral like that drifting place between being awake and asleep, until somewhere around the last part where it began to read with a bit more … clarity? Like breaking through water, if that makes sense. But I loved it, which is the point, and I think the choppiness used throughout – the grasping thoughts and broken lines – helped to convey what (I’m assuming) you intended to with a certain vulnerability and rawness that couldn’t have been reached through any string of words.
That aside, I loved Naruto and Sasuke in here too. I could feel them, in their personalities and in their interactions, even though (canonically, at least) we’ve never seen them like this. The tenderness and the intimacy of what they share – even before they're aware that they're sharing it, and even before they've consciously opened their selves up to sharing it, specifically on Sasuke's part – is palpable, and genuinely believable, and it's made this so warm. :)
Anyway, I don't want to babble my way into incoherency (although I fear I'm already bordering on that, if I haven't already managed it) so I'll stop! Thank you, though, for writing and sharing this. It's truly a satisfying read, and it's only solidified why I find myself loving these two so much.
| Mahayana chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
That was... beautiful to read. I don't even have the words to say just how much I liked it. The part where Naruto, in response to Sasuke not wanting to say what he dreams of, tells Sasuke of his own dreams of being invisible. It was... very touching. What a lovely character piece. Thank you for writing it. It was a pleasure to read.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
it's nice reading this. give me this warm feeling. thank you.
| Ennu chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Cute one shot :3
| nn chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
| Vein is Simply Tired chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Fic like this makes life worth while
Thank you for making this :D
| Bowllama chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
| Ookami-Ryuu chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
I remember reading this a very long time ago. I enjoyed it then, I very much enjoyed it this time too.
It's very nice and well written.
| Rachel chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
I love this so very much! Simply amazing!