That ending hurt. It was lovely, but the endings to almost all good stories hurt. Thank you.

love all of your stories. I have read this one probably 20times and I never get tired of it. kinda wish it could become a move of sorts to see it on the big screen would be amazing.

Thirty plus chapters of dumbass being shown to be just as evil, twisted & foul as anybody else...thirty chapters of all that set up...and now it's a chance that he just gets to "retire quietly" and leave harry alone? Literally said in the story that he used mind control to get strange to kill Sirius...and you're hinting that he just gets to keep his image because most wouldn't believe it about him?

Fucking asshole, what was the POINT of showing all the scumbag stuff that the old bastard was up to then?

Geezus. They are literally letting old dumbass still do his usual bs? Wtf is up with all this over the top performative "wait until we can get him" pacing? They literally just got trained by the founders and the school itself said that it was leveraging most control to them. So if the castle is so powerful and has pulled a lot of that power from dumbass, why are they still just sitting and watching a known enemy trying to undermine them? Even moRon and his ho sister shouldn't be a consideration of a problem now.

Yep, it's a story. That has words & chapters in it. And that means stuff has to happen. But a robin isn't exactly something that anybody would associate with assertive leadership qualities, the mythology symbolism known or not. I mean, a air rifle could take Harry out..with one shot. That's wild. Really wild. But it's a story...with words & chapters...and things do have to occur.

Man. The joke stuff is funny. But is getting a bit exhaustive.

Again...why are they not accounting for the old idiot to not do something rash?

And see...THAT'S why you muzzle any opposition that poses a threat, instead of charming suits of armor to say rude stuff and filling up an office with candy. The enemy is trying to kill. Not prank. KILL.

That would've been the perfect spot for someone on their side to die, just to show that it's not a game.

The thing I don't understand is the sense in leaving a known hostile open to pull some sort of element of surprise on you. Any competent general...even a soldier...would know that you do not maintain control of a situation no matter how trustworthy your "intelligence" is. That's how someone inevitably gets hurt: inaction by someone who wants to play as if they've accounted for everything...and then the opposition pulls something unpredictable.

MoRon and his slut sister need to be brought to heel. Their family is going to be broken up either way once it happens, so why would a competent group of strategist even take that risk to drag out the inevitable? It is a state of war that they are actively engaged in.

That's attempted rape. If you don't kill Ron after that admission, then you have a very poor moral compass, even in a fictional story. ALL rapists should die...and die screaming in agony.

Damn it. Why does that bastard snape get to be redeemed? Fuck him. He purposely took his time in telling the order what was going on. And Sirius died.

Not everybody needs a redemption or the "dumbass made me do it" plot device.

Poor Hermione. I always feel bad for her when the story has to make sure her parents leave the country to be safe.

Sometimes, a nice dive into cliche is very much appreciated. This was one of my earliest stories I read when I got into fanfiction from this series as a huge Harmony shipper. Been a while since I read it but I'm enjoying going through it again

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