Reviews for Harry Potter and the Manipulator of Destiny
Kitten99 chapter 5 . 7/30
Look, I've always disliked HP/HG, but you make it seem like the best pairing ever!
The Hermit chapter 16 . 7/27
I dont know if after all this time if you are still checking these reviews. If you are you shoould know about a slight error in your writing, you continually use the word of when you should be using the word have. Take this small section from this chapter::: He had to 'of' betrayed them to Voldemort. ::: It should read : He had to 'have' betrayed them to Voldemort. I know it is not a huge error but it is rather annoying as it is simply writing what has become an idle form of speech that has no place in writen work.
nightwing27 chapter 32 . 7/25
in my story too it will be an army millions and it will be on the potters side many from the current present and many from the past join forces and one nasty surprise in the end one t-rex to attack tom in the past
nightwing27 chapter 28 . 7/25
that gay old fool never learns he's failure at life and a coward using kids while he sits back and watch others die
nightwing27 chapter 19 . 7/25
and my story will have james father as minister and will ruin that gay old fools plans and then tell him that he knows his future plot for his son and future wife
nightwing27 chapter 15 . 7/25
good thing in my story everyone will know the dirty secert of tom riddle and it won't be in the present it will be the past where harry will go to school with his parents
nightwing27 chapter 36 . 7/25
nice death for that coward rat for my story I have a more nasty death death for that coward when harry goes back in time to go to school with his parents he's going to take over as heir and kick out all death eaters but one the rat he's going to be in one nasty suprise. all of hogwarts and hogsmade is going to be anti death eater and anyone with an evil heart aka dumble whore will not be allowed any where near for dumbledore it will be alittle later
thorn.draco chapter 39 . 7/20
best harry potter hero story ever

harry becoming a white dragon with his friends the best
HGlover15 chapter 39 . 7/12
The very ending is so sweet, my eyes watered, you should keep writing
Guest chapter 11 . 7/10
I agree with your end note on ch. 11 if people think badly of a story they can just shut up and let the rest of us enjoy. If they feel they can do better they can write their own. I know I couldn't write one of these.
Caphalor chapter 5 . 7/10
keep this up, i like where it is going
tiggerdavis1970 chapter 39 . 7/6
That was truly wonderful! I loved it so much! I couldn't stop reading it! Amazing! Perfect!
Fezzes Are Red chapter 39 . 7/4
Damn good, my Lord/Lady. Very well written.
glayce Alves da Silva chapter 39 . 7/3
Oi eu sou uma leitora brasileira e gostei muito da sua históposta parabéns
Jenifer chapter 11 . 7/2
Well said. As a middle school librarian who can come up with ideas but can't get past that, I always enjoy reading other people's works.
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