|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Manipulator of Destiny|
| sylvelle chapter 30 . 10/22/2015
| sylvelle chapter 28 . 10/22/2015
Not knowing what you did yet, I'd like to see her offed by mouldyshorts.
Also not sure anyone mentioned it to you, I think leathery wings were mentioned at some point. And I think the movie also looked like bat wings.
| sylvelle chapter 26 . 10/21/2015
So you made him a robin for the laugh basically
| sylvelle chapter 19 . 10/21/2015
Hermione should have a passport as she goes to France and Italy with her parents in past summers. Just saying.
| sylvelle chapter 16 . 10/20/2015
The story is fine like it is. The Viagra was bad, but seemed to fit Ginny in your story. I am not a Harry/Hermione fan.. I understand why A Ron/Hermione match seems unlikely though even in canon.
Dumping on Ron seems like a natural response from Lavender to me. I don't often feel sorry for Lav, but I do in this story.
| sylvelle chapter 14 . 10/20/2015
So Dumbles hasn't used a potion or spell, to keep the connection? Okay I can go with your expiation, it makes sense.
| sylvelle chapter 13 . 10/20/2015
Interesting that Harry went to 'death mark' death eater Dumbledore.. I thought ''heart attack' I wonder.
| sylvelle chapter 11 . 10/20/2015
Perhaps a definition of 'constructive criticism' would be beneficial.
i.e. constructive: Intending to improve or promote development; having a use
Emphasizing what is laudable, hopeful or to the good
criticism: A serious examination and judgment of something.
A written evaluation of a work of literature.
Another meaning is less constructive: Disapproval expressed by pointing out faults or shortcomings.
Fart to often this is what I see. Not constructive, but often mean-spirited. IMHO
I am enjoying this story a great deal and am very glad you completed it.
| crankypants16 chapter 39 . 10/18/2015
Really enjoyed your story. Thank you.
| Stone chapter 28 . 10/13/2015
A threstrals is basically an undead Pegasus. So it basically haze bony dead Pegasus wings
| Caro Black-Potter chapter 39 . 10/13/2015
I loved your story. Thank you so much for writing it. I think you should work on a little more angsty and bad stuff, because those are things that just happen in books. However, if you don't want to write them, you don't have to. I'm quite sure that there are many people who don't like angsty things. However, you write absolutely amazingly and with such creativity that I think it would be a waste if you didn't try and write something of your own. I myself write books and I have loads to learn so I skim loads of things to help me write angsty or fluffy. I hope that you'll have luck with whatever you're going to do and once again, thank you for writing the fanfiction
| Caro Black-Potter chapter 11 . 10/11/2015
(reply to the snarky author notes)
Well, I for one think it's quite a splendid story... Most of the times, if I don't like a story, I just go away from it. And since I like this story, I won't.
Besides, in Canon Dumbledore isn't being bashed upon. In canon the house-elves don't react like this. In canon Snape wouldn't even dare to cast legilimency on Harry like that in front of Dumbledore. In canon Harry isn't this smart.
THAT'S PROBABLY WHY THIS IS ALTERNATE UNIVERSE/FANFICTION! FANFICTION IS PRETTY MUCH BASED ON MAKING A STORY BASED ON A BOOK/STORY/WHATTHEFUCKYOUCANCOMEUPWITH!
Jesus. Flamers... I completely support you and I really, really like this story. Don't you fucking dare shut it down, it's too good for that! (wait, wasn't this complete by the time I went reading it? Who cares, gotta say it anyway)
| Shadow's Half-Life chapter 29 . 10/9/2015
Wallace and gromit-single m and single t
Sorry if you find this know it all,
Also, love is quite commonly used thank women
Even if you don't know them
| icemains chapter 23 . 10/9/2015
I AM pretty sure i would go to slytherin. perhaps griffindor.
| Bronze chapter 5 . 10/3/2015
I hope you're reading this as I do think you've done at least ONE thing original with this. I have never read anywhere else that Harry learned Goblin magic. Elven magic? several times but never Goblin. OOOOPS! Made a alight boo-boo there. I forgot about the story Harry Crow where Vernon SOLD Harry to the Goblins and they raised him like their own. Quite a long story at 109 chapters. It's a H/Hr ship type story by the way.