Reviews for Revelation
Grey Wolf4 chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
This was a good bit of fluff and nice hypothesis on Miyabi Kagurazaki maybe she does have feelings for Aoi and I did get to see a comment on some site (forget where it is) about a speculation that Tina might be bisexual.
hattuteline chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Zomg an AYA fic! And shoujo-ai too! I don't know what to say! :D

The double POV realization at the breast fondling part made me wonder if this was a porn fic or not. Luckily the viewpoint was then wrestled by Tina and the fic kept a nice, light mood. Since the actual series was so one-track with it's relationship building, it's very nice to see the characters act in different manners too. A parrot sticker and a cookie for you! ;
Vampwriter chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
A very sweet story. I'd like to dee how their relationship develops and who'll be the first to admit feelings for the other.
writer-jm chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
Thanks for writing Ai Yori Aoshi! I just finished the anime with my friends. Out of all the characters, Tina and Miyabi were the first possible shoujo-ai couple to come to mind. Then, they kind of let them be seperate too much and Tina really kick up her Kaoru-crush. I really feel bad about how she'll feel when she finds out.(unless she does in the manga).

I really like how you progressed. The relationship isn't rushed, but is almost comfortable. Their friendship has some tension, but I think Tina needs the chance to bond with her. You've given them the opportunity. The rest will carry on in my head!

I'm a big fan. Sorry this is my first review. There's just so much to review.

P.S. My favorite story is Angel's Gift! I read it off of I Love It! I want to see more of Sharin and Milly. They're cute (at least in my head!)

Thanks for becoming a writer!

Sincerely,

writer-jm