Reviews for The Heroic Return
The Chesire Cat chapter 6 . 3/14/2008
aw, shika-kun is so cute! *snuggles him*

like the story so far. )
Mariko chapter 9 . 10/17/2007
DAMMIT ALL! Getting my hopes up on the 'Sasuke must be killed' part and then crushing them. -.- That was low! It was an ok story, went kinda fast though. O_O;
SeparatedCow chapter 9 . 12/28/2006

The ending is so good, the story is so good. Everything about this is NICE. Thank you for writing such a work of ART.

Pampan chapter 9 . 12/20/2006
Uwaah~ -is in awe- they didn't die...X3 YaY!1 Nice job at ending the story!~
StarsOfYaoi chapter 9 . 12/20/2006
that's masterfranny with her other account!

wa *cries* that was the eend! *wails* (thanks for warning me, i didn't get your fic alerts...)

anyway, for a sec i really thought they'd be dead, but thankfully enough they were not... though, the ending left me a bit spaced out, as it was really good, but... aw... *feels unsatisfied* but it was undeniably good, and i like how you had sasuke and naruto leave (though, maybe my unsatisfaction comes from the fact that you could have made the parting a bit longer... *cuddles*)

this is by no means a complaint, i loved it. i feel sad it's finished, that's because i wanted more *wails*

but i am glad it's finished well and no one died. thanks for writing it, and i liked it a lot *cuddles*

dimonyo-anghel chapter 8 . 7/6/2006
AH! I'm so confused! You completed your goal, now, can you PLEASE explain to me what just happend?
Pampan chapter 8 . 7/5/2006
This was really good, something different ne? Never had Shika like that, I enjoyed it, x3. I'm just a bit shocked, Naru and Sasu died? Or am I reading wrong TT_TT(I hope so I don't want them to die!) Update soon but don't rush please?
SeparatedCow chapter 7 . 4/25/2006
dimonyo-anghel chapter 7 . 3/8/2006
WHAATT! are they really going to kill sasuke! he freakin' told the truth and regretted having to even start the plan! thanks for updating!
MasterFranny chapter 7 . 3/8/2006
isn't that a bit... too much? O_O kill him... er... O_O


anywa, that was really unexpected... and unless it's bad, love unexpected happenings! thus I enjoyed the (rather short) wonderful chapter!

please, update soon!

and, I wonder what naruto would have to say in this. and where is Shika-kun? *wonders* and is Sasuke too much into Oro's grip that can't be saved in any way? *she's too nice even with the ones she hates... or despises...*

so! Post soon so I can know! .

Gozen V chapter 7 . 3/8/2006
awesome fanfic, i just wish that skikamaru would not join up back so soon. Hope you update soon
MasterFranny chapter 6 . 2/25/2006
I am happy to see you updated! And I am taking back my respect of Tsunade with this chapter XDXD

Well, Shika will be the top ninja here against Sasuke, and I hope Naruto will have some sort of role in this as well *loves Naruto dearly*

I hope you will update the next chapter soon enough! Please please please!

dimonyo-anghel chapter 6 . 2/25/2006
hehe thanks for updating! soo in the part where tsunade wanted to kiss shikamaru's forehead, does that mean she kinda considers him like she considers naruto... (grand)son-ish?
MasterFranny chapter 5 . 2/6/2006
Aw, the confrontation *pounces you* Naruto come on Kick ass! (although, he had to expect Sasuke to be changed, after all this time)

Anyway, I hope for the next chapter to be up really soon and I want to see more of Shika-kun! *hugs you and Shika-kun*


PSgreat fic, great fic.
MasterFranny chapter 4 . 2/6/2006
Aw, Shika is so fucking cool *her first fav chara in the last few days has become Shika-kun* I love him so much! .

And Chouji is so nice nice, they are really great friends *is pondering to add Chouji somewhere in her fic since she happened to forget Chouji's existence*

Naruto with Shika, together against the threat of Sasuke and Oro*coughbastardcough*chimaru! .

*note that she doesn't like Sasuke-kun that much... she likes him, but... simply not so much*

Anyway, great chapter! I wanna read the next soon and... *notices there is actually another chapter* wo! *runs away to read*

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