this story is so bad, it's literally just cooy and paste from the book, with randomly placed mistakes and a few added inside voice commentary. not worth the read

Great story love sinecal Harry
Thanks

Also Hermione lived forever too and before when they were young still they have a daughter so they didn’t feel bad about anything else.

even though I am commenting on chapter 1, I read till 4 and I have to quit reading. it's 99% copy and paste with 1% of the fanfiction authors work and it is mostly mental evaluations. this is crap

you may as well have copy pasted from the book

Not sure why you're forcing ron into the story, Hermione was bad enough but to make herm like him after the troll thing and force harry to like him... it just ruins 5the he story so I'm going stop here.

Ok What is this shit ? if i want to see the Original then i fucking look at the Movie or read the Original Book this is the same shit with a little bit more Humor thats it.
Dont bother reading this shit-fic

I loved this story, I don't think I have laughed so much for a long time.
Thankyou.

this is basicly canon with a slightly more sceptical harry providing commentary. it is well written but a rehash of canon is not alexactly a new story

Sigh... I REALY LIKE THIS STORY!
Want a sequel pretty bad.

Sigh... such a short story. REALLY NEEDS A SEUQUEL.

honestly kinda annoyed at MC wearing those magic suppressors. I'd bet money dumbles gave them to him solely to slow and stunt his growth.
REALLY want the author to write a sequel.

good story weird ending

thanks

This was an awesome fic. Thank you.