Reviews for The Power
rankokunalpha1 chapter 25 . 20h
the end comments were just evil but then your Darth Bill so its allowed awesome work!
RFTL80 chapter 7 . 5/4
Love the ending to the chapter. Cannot wait to see how this works down the line.
Marie-S-Raven chapter 1 . 3/29
It moves a little fast, but it doesn't suffer for it. I really like this, thank you for writing it!
Gaelas chapter 25 . 3/16
Guest chapter 2 . 3/3
Really all your doing is resighting the book. I know because i read the series half a dozen times
NHarem Foreva chapter 25 . 2/27
I think this is the 4th time I've read this story. It's just so good, that every time I'm bored and searching through the HP archives for older stories, and I read the summary of this one, I get hooked, then try to favorite it and see it's already on my list. The only thing I wish was different is that there was a bit of citrusy action for Harry/Fleur, or at least more detail than what was given on their actual relationship, cause I'd love to see everyone's reaction, plus I'd also love to see Harry attend her wedding with Bill, and have him piss everyone off by wearing the "I had sex with Harry" shirt to the reception and pissing everyone off. Would be funny, especially if the visual reminder got Fleur turned on and she tried to pull him aside to ask for one last romp only to get ousted by an eavesdropping Bill. I'd laugh my ass off...oh, and maybe as the only 2 people in the world to live forever, Harry/Hermione just makes sense, no? Especially with what Hermione said in the tent, about jumping straight in if what Harry had declared about losing his virginity had actually been a proposition to her? Totally makes that ship possible. Anyway, just wanted to share my excitement over a good read...again...thanks for the story
swordworks chapter 25 . 2/21
I loved it, and I also found your idea with the lich interesting. Your fic gave me everything I could have wished.

This fic gets 9 points from 10. Funny and very interesting fic and I loved how easily Harry killed the Dursleys, instead of forgiving them or all this drama crap you normally read in other fics. I really loved that this fiction had no drama and instead had an MC that so fast and easily solved his problems, without all this being good and morally right crap.
Rhino109 chapter 1 . 1/22
First chapter is just a duplicate of the movie. *Sarcastic clap* Great writing skills, can't even get the dialogue from a movie right.
mistbornlax chapter 23 . 1/13
Great story over all, BUT:

Stop the Hermione worship ("As smart as he was, he knew she was smarter.")!

Hermione isn't bad at school, hell she excells at academia and she even goes beyond what is normally taught (the DA-Coins for example), but she's NOT a prodigy. Smart but not a genius! She basically is a really hard working student, but she's not either Merlin, Dumbledore or Tom Riddle (or even the Marauders!) in that she excells in school without really trying and spending her time doing all extra curicular work like say looking up horcruxes (well: something similar, without the dark connotations!) or designing something like the dark-mark! She's not even making her own spells like a certain snivelling person (Severus Snape!) :)

You should justify it if you put her on a pedestal ("smartest witch of her age" - right, we don't even have a ranking of her against the whole rest of the year but I am pretty certain that Neville has her beat in herbology, Harry has her beat in defense etc. etc.), so make her smarter if you really think she is a prodigy (because in canon she's not, she's intelligent and hard working (and a teacher's pet, too as she's McGonagall's favourite!), but not really extra ordinary!)

ps: Needs a touch of AU, too (if you change Harry this much, then why would he basically follow the canon path?)
MikeyBlue chapter 24 . 1/2
Great, I with there where more storys like this.
MikeyBlue chapter 25 . 1/2
Great, I with there where more storys like this.
Sefera chapter 25 . 11/15/2016
Vary good. Just what I was looking for.
Competence porn chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
And it's hilarious, too. Loved it. Giggled my ass off. You'd like Seventh Horcrux, if you haven't read it yet.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/26/2016
As far as I know, (maybe it's different in the British version, but I doubt it) Ron's second-oldest brother's name is spelled Charlie.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/26/2016
Tonks is currently a seventh year Hufflepuff. Therefore, she cannot be the Gryffindor seeker. Usually, I wouldn't be so nitpicky, but Tonks being a Hufflepuff shows that not all good, brave characters are Gryffindors. It's kind of important to me.
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