Reviews for The Power |
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Guest chapter 20 . 10/2/2018 dropped guard - dropped his guard |
Guest chapter 19 . 10/2/2018 I haven't a broom - I don't have a broom innocent expression of innocence (word repetition) Imperious - Imperius |
Guest chapter 18 . 10/2/2018 the middle their - the middle of their |
Guest chapter 18 . 10/2/2018 confidant look - confident look |
Guest chapter 17 . 10/2/2018 wrapped not rapped |
Guest chapter 15 . 10/2/2018 Imperious Curse - Imperius Curse |
Guest chapter 15 . 10/2/2018 If you care the slightest bit about this story, or have any pride in your work, please edit the chapters, there are way too many sloppy errors. incedent - incident concidered - considered |
Guest chapter 15 . 10/2/2018 retrobution - retribution |
Guest chapter 14 . 10/2/2018 to breath - to breathe |
Guest chapter 13 . 10/2/2018 Her name is Myrtle Warren, not Manfree |
Guest chapter 13 . 10/2/2018 fawn, not faun |
Guest chapter 12 . 10/2/2018 didn't you really do all should be "did you" |
Guest chapter 11 . 10/2/2018 I don't believe that wizards can levitate themselves, only others |
Guest chapter 11 . 10/2/2018 wretched, not retched |
dephunkt chapter 25 . 9/27/2018 this is hilarious. would love to see it turned into a movie |