Reviews for The Power |
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Apple89123 chapter 25 . 2/21/2017 I loved it, and I also found your idea with the lich interesting. Your fic gave me everything I could have wished. This fic gets 9 points from 10. Funny and very interesting fic and I loved how easily Harry killed the Dursleys, instead of forgiving them or all this drama crap you normally read in other fics. I really loved that this fiction had no drama and instead had an MC that so fast and easily solved his problems, without all this being good and morally right crap. |
Rhino109 chapter 1 . 1/22/2017 First chapter is just a duplicate of the movie. *Sarcastic clap* Great writing skills, can't even get the dialogue from a movie right. |
mistbornlax chapter 23 . 1/13/2017 Great story over all, BUT: Stop the Hermione worship ("As smart as he was, he knew she was smarter.")! Hermione isn't bad at school, hell she excells at academia and she even goes beyond what is normally taught (the DA-Coins for example), but she's NOT a prodigy. Smart but not a genius! She basically is a really hard working student, but she's not either Merlin, Dumbledore or Tom Riddle (or even the Marauders!) in that she excells in school without really trying and spending her time doing all extra curicular work like say looking up horcruxes (well: something similar, without the dark connotations!) or designing something like the dark-mark! She's not even making her own spells like a certain snivelling person (Severus Snape!) :) You should justify it if you put her on a pedestal ("smartest witch of her age" - right, we don't even have a ranking of her against the whole rest of the year but I am pretty certain that Neville has her beat in herbology, Harry has her beat in defense etc. etc.), so make her smarter if you really think she is a prodigy (because in canon she's not, she's intelligent and hard working (and a teacher's pet, too as she's McGonagall's favourite!), but not really extra ordinary!) ps: Needs a touch of AU, too (if you change Harry this much, then why would he basically follow the canon path?) |
MikeyBlue chapter 24 . 1/2/2017 Great, I with there where more storys like this. |
MikeyBlue chapter 25 . 1/2/2017 Great, I with there where more storys like this. |
Sefera chapter 25 . 11/15/2016 Vary good. Just what I was looking for. |
Competence porn chapter 1 . 11/5/2016 And it's hilarious, too. Loved it. Giggled my ass off. You'd like Seventh Horcrux, if you haven't read it yet. |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/26/2016 As far as I know, (maybe it's different in the British version, but I doubt it) Ron's second-oldest brother's name is spelled Charlie. |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/26/2016 Tonks is currently a seventh year Hufflepuff. Therefore, she cannot be the Gryffindor seeker. Usually, I wouldn't be so nitpicky, but Tonks being a Hufflepuff shows that not all good, brave characters are Gryffindors. It's kind of important to me. |
SuperPotterWhoLock110 chapter 25 . 10/23/2016 "any Tom, Dick or Harry; any Tom, Harry or Dick!Kiss Me Kate |
deathlyHealer chapter 3 . 10/14/2016 Pff. Run is a dumbass. Loving this! Tis awesome :) |
deathlyHealer chapter 1 . 10/14/2016 Haha wow holy heck I can tell this is gonna be great! I love it so far. You wanna know a really funny thing? Remember the Harry Potter fic, Boredom Is Deadly? The one where Harry is death? Well I was reading those reviews and stumbled upon yours. So now I'm here XD Can't wait to see where this goes! |
Peanut-Butter-Bandit chapter 25 . 10/11/2016 That was great! |
Guest chapter 25 . 10/8/2016 Wow, nice fiction. Thanks. But the ending was somewhat rushed. And I am disappointed that you didn't write lemons. Or that you haven't put up Hermione and Harry as pairing. Well, okay, both of them are still friends after 80 years and seem both to be youthful immortals, so maybe they will marry later on. It would be a shame if not. |
Guest chapter 11 . 10/8/2016 I am a bit upset that Harry felt a part of Voldemort from Mr. Malfoy transfer to the Weasley Family and isn't doing something about it. I mean, come on! The last time he felt that energy Voldemort was sticking on Quirrels head and he is feeling that same energy from the Weasleys now! And then a few weeks later the Chamber of Secrets opens again after 50 years... he should be able to tell that Mr. Malfoy let a Weasey being possessed by Voldemort! |