Reviews for The Power
Reviewer chapter 7 . 2/17/2019
I cant read anymore of this. Its barely any different from the actual book.
DarkAphrodite chapter 25 . 12/28/2018
thank you this was amazing
Guest chapter 3 . 12/27/2018
You try to hard to follow canon even when the difference between canon Harry and this one should create change. The scene with the troll is completely illogical and should have never happen : how is that possible for Harry to not know what Ron said to Hermione after the class ? Why wasn't he with her when it happen ? Why would Harry wait until the end of the day before starting to search for her ? It so obvious you recreated it so Ron could join their group of friends. It make your story look artificial because you force things to happen like in canon. I'm frankly disappointed in this story, it could have been interesting.
The Blind Dragon chapter 4 . 12/12/2018
Wow. It's almost like reading the original books word for word again.
Sorry, I just can't read any further.
PortgazDAdz chapter 25 . 12/10/2018
Mind BLOWN!
AWESOME!
BookWormGirl93 chapter 25 . 12/7/2018
Oh my god, I couldn't stop laughing! my favorite of it all is when he called Voldemort a devil baby! I couldn't stop laughing! my second favorite was when Harry was in dragon form and shat in the Dursley's house! That was fantastic! Hahahahahahahahaha I love this fic! definitely going on my favorites list! XD
DontMindMe chapter 25 . 11/29/2018
While it felt a bit rushed i was an interesting story.
LoganTheLoneWolf chapter 2 . 11/19/2018
very little detail.
BillBrink chapter 23 . 11/13/2018
This is so funny it's beyond recreational smoke. I am so glad I decided to do this again. Thanks.
BTW, I am convinced that you have to have at least part of this version of Harry in your makeup to write like this.
BillBrink chapter 18 . 11/13/2018
This is my second through, so I get to enjoy the jokes even more this time. "Their underwear pillow fight"? LOL Thanks. It's making the evening so much better.
Ahmed Maged chapter 6 . 11/4/2018
Fuck this story
She like ron !?
Cliche
DROPPED
Bigbenk chapter 25 . 10/4/2018
one of the funniest stories I've ever read.
Guest chapter 25 . 10/2/2018
and the flabbergasted when the statue continues - and was flabbergasted when the statue continued

Signate Ring - signet ring

Ever sinse - The rumours had flourished ever since

elixer - elixir

ones life - one's life

Minsiter - Minister
Guest chapter 24 . 10/2/2018
did you chose - did you choose

Krun - Krum

made his swear - made him swear

imperioused - imperiused
Guest chapter 23 . 10/2/2018
possision - position

Please fix this, it's really a shame to leave an otherwise entertaining story with flaws such as these:

governer - governor

rapped - wrapped

appauled - appalled

hygine - hygiene

Legilemencer - Legilimencer

existance - existence

Hogsmead - Hogsmeade

his animagus to everyone - his animagus form to everyone

rapped - wrapped
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