|Reviews for OathKeeper|
| crystalnami chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
wow this is absolutely amazing! you are an exradordinary writer i have to say!
your sentence structures and the words you use are amazing!
such a cute poem, i thought it captured kairi's thoughts about sora perfectly!
just beautiful! well done!
| xshadowbornx chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Wow, what a beautiful poem. I liked the part about the "nostalgic colored window..." gotta love "Passion!" Keep up the great work!
| Raccoon48 chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Ah! Sorry, i read this earlier, but it wouldn't let me review! *pouty* But it was very beautiful! I really loved the emotion you put into it, it made me sad! Poor Kairi. *sniffles* You wrote it for school? Heh, what'd ur teacher think? Anyways, i thought it was wondeful and fancy, and hope to see some more updates from u soon! *hugs*
| Angel Of Blacksouls chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
REally really good and cute. Great job. :)
| Sora's GuardianAngel chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
That poem was beautiful! Love it! :)
| da marshmallow chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
that was an AWESOME poem! :D:D:D:D
i wish i could write poetry as good as you :D:D:D
| IceBlueWings chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
You got some of them from Passion, didn't you? Like "the window that was painted a nostalgic color" that was in Passion. Haha...well, I don't mind anyways, coz its a really good poem. It shows how much has happened between the two. And how Kairi feels deeply about Sora. Good!
| sorakairi forever chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
Man ur writting skills never ceaz to amaze me ur such a good writter I rly loved this poem and thank u so much for ur awsome rev I'm sry I haven't updated well its just I've been on mt death bed countless times and I was in comma for a couple of days and just 2 days ago I got poisoned so I'm rly sry for not updating if ppl wud just let me live I wud but I don't wanna bore u wit dat well thanks again and I can't wait till u update ur other strys its been a while I hope u update them well untill next time that's if my family let's me have next time who knows wut thet have planned for me next *sigh* they just don't get it I share and imbreakable bond wit my friends and love so they can't seperate us well I'll be waiting for dad update
| Sorasgirl333 chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
*gasp!* i absolutly loved it! we definantly needed more SoraxKairi stories, they seem to be dying out for some odd reason. This was so sweet. perfect wording! XD way to go!