|Reviews for Sacrifice|
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/25/2007
I'm sorry, I just couldn't bring myself to read the nejisaku. I LOATHE that pairing, even if the fic isn't based on it, but from reading the first chapter, I can see that it is extremley well written.
| dreaming.sapphire chapter 5 . 8/29/2007
dun dun dun! cliffhanger! and i will jump off a cliff i don't find out what happens. ] update soon please!
| Azaria Stromsis chapter 5 . 8/15/2007
Oh! A cliffhanger! The suspense is killing me! I can't wait for the next update, and I really love your writing style! You've made me want to read The Sound and the Fury too!
| HimeHeenim chapter 5 . 8/12/2007
Oh!The suspense!I'm really not pleased with Sakura being a Hyuuga. I think I have similar preference with you on her. I don't like her, and I definitely don't like her with Neji. I hope something will happen between our favourite couple soon!
| HimeHeenim chapter 2 . 8/12/2007
I reread this story again and I can't help but feel captivated with every description. I wish I could write a good story like how you usually do, but I guess I'm not really made for writing. _;
All those who read my stories will eventually die because of the suffering XDD
However yours are good and can be made into a !
| waylonggone chapter 3 . 8/7/2007
OMG! ... wait, they both objected right? Okay, if they did...
YES! THEY OBJECTED!
ep. I can't WAIT til you update this!
| Muroony chapter 5 . 8/6/2007
I like this story. I admit, it is confusing and makes you think, but in a semi-good way. This story is deeper than all the others fanfics with a cheap plot (gomen minna-san) and rough descriptions. Your fic takes more of a philosiphical look at the possiblity of a NejiSaku pairing, and also what their "traditional" pairings think and do.
But, in Chapters 2,3,4, I think that you have (unintentionally, I hope) made the characters slightly OOC. Sakura seems much more colder, and Tenten slightly more bitchy. To improve, try to watch some of the Naruto episodes is a great place to start) to get a feel of the characters if you haven't already.
| Choco-Haruka chapter 5 . 7/22/2007
Beautiful writing style. Your descriptions are very vivid and I can picture everything perfectly. Personally, I found that reading your guidelines was unnecessary, but it's a good idea for people who are unfamiliar with complicated writing. I haven't read Faulkner, but I've read many complicated novels as well. It's a good sign if your story gets people thinking - it means your story has depth and an excellent storyline :) So keep up your writing talent! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
| LaZyFMAgirl chapter 5 . 7/13/2007
Whoever has the GUTS to flame this story obviously is too much of a simpleton to appreciate high quality works with emotional dept. I seriously LOVE this fic now. Your writing is just so...good! lol its so much better compared to most of the fics on this site. I find it annoying how for every decent story, there's like at least three fics with OOC/crack/horible spelling/no plot in it!
I really like how you describe the frustration of all the characters. i feel the mood to be dark, sad and mysterious, and i like it like that cause it you can get the reader to feel the Strong emotions without something like a tragic death. Usually, i only feel this kind of emotion when the story is totally centered around a character death. I'm SO jealous of how you can give the fic an angst feeling all throughout and keep the plot real and developing.
PLEASE UPDATE SOONER THIS TIME!
| engr4t300 chapter 5 . 7/12/2007
haha yayy i luved paper shiriken XD lol update soon way sooner ;P
| The Twins chapter 5 . 7/12/2007
PyRoChiCk: Yaya you finally updated good! Please hurry and update again it was a cliffie and I can't take the suspense.
PyRoDuDe: Bout Frecking time you updated I was starting to belive that you would nvr update. Good story update soon.
| Dreaming101 chapter 5 . 7/9/2007
O.O WTF! who would want to flame this story! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this fic! The plot is AWESOME, characters are REMARKABLE, and most of all I envy your writing style... it's so AMAZING! Really, GREAT job! UPDATE SOON!
And to all the flamers of this story, you just don't know a great story when you see one...
| faerichylde chapter 5 . 7/5/2007
I really do enjoy this, I have been finding very good writing on the site nowadays. If my writing was half as good as yours I would be happy for the rest of my life. But I have to be content in reading yours. So sad, I know.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
KILL DA NEJISAKU!AND SASUSAKU!AND ALL THE SAKURA PAIRINGS COZ SHES A MEAN BITCH!
| Ayatsuri Sakkaku chapter 5 . 7/4/2007
I absolutely love your style of writting. I wish I could write like you...