Reviews for Forever
Random Dice chapter 38 . 9/12/2007

Random Dice chapter 22 . 9/12/2007
i love that chapter GO MC!

vipercharmed chapter 6 . 6/7/2007
Love it.
ShadowVixen chapter 38 . 2/1/2007
Wow, I really wasn't expecting this ending! I'm impressed! Trust me, I completely understand your reasoning for ending the story this way. I LOVED this story, you did a wonderful job. :)
caseyswife chapter 37 . 1/31/2007
WoW - what a surprise ending! I definitely look forward to the sequel!
kateBA chapter 14 . 1/28/2007
I liked the love that Bobby and Alex have for each other in your story. I like how there seems to be a continous timeline as it goes through their life together. What I don't like is how Alex is a weepy sap in this story who seems to break down every minute. At first it was happening during her pregnancy and you could attribute it to hormones, but then with every little thing she just breaks down and starts sobbing. There are certainly women like that and there is nothing wrong with being emotional but that is not Alex. Of course she has a lot to cry about, just tragedy after tragedy striking at them. A story can be interesting without so much tragedy. Then there are your situations which stretch the imagination, like Alex's four day labor. The fact that Alex becomes a stay at home mom is questionable. I understand it's very hard to find daycare, but the reality is you can't decide to take a year off and then go back to your job. It doesn't work that way, you get two months tops and then you have to make a decision between your job and your baby and I can't see Alex giving up her job.
val2244 chapter 37 . 1/19/2007

thats a really big twist...

i'll be reading the sequel.
lallyb1743 chapter 38 . 1/19/2007
The ending surprised me. I'm glad there is going to be a sequel. I'm interested in knowing how everyone dealt with Alex while she was out of it. And also Bobby's reaction to her dream.
LucyStar7 chapter 38 . 1/19/2007
just read the ending OH MY GOD ! it was a DREAM ? that's not fair ...what about Mike and Carolyn ? however great story * waiting for the sequel*
Secret Phoenix 679 chapter 38 . 1/19/2007
YAY! Im just reveiwing for the heck of it :D

Hehehee violence...
iluvstabler chapter 38 . 1/18/2007
I hope that violence is aimed at Bobby...Eames has had enough.
WeHaveACase chapter 37 . 1/18/2007
Oh Damn! So not how I saw that ending...still good though. Looking forward to the sequel!
mcabello chapter 37 . 1/18/2007
Good chapter. Write more soon.
Secret Phoenix 679 chapter 37 . 1/18/2007
AH i love it :D Excellent Chapter...Exccellent end to the story :D

ANd omg! Took my 12 hours to download Happy Accidents! But i have it! :D Now to burn it...
Secret Phoenix 679 chapter 36 . 1/18/2007
You know i love it :D
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