Reviews for I need to tell you
mountain ash chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
this is beautiful! I liked your similie. Keep Writing!
holly juliet opal chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
cute poem! lovely!
Annie-morphs chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
That was lovely! I totally enjoyed it. It's very good work, and I think you should continue making more poems. You have amazing talent. It even rhymes! I can't do that. At all.
XxEviexX chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
OMG! I love it!

~HLA
aardvark 777 chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
Hi its sparky,

Good poem uve got a talent 4 writing keep it up!
Izzfrogger chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
wow, good poetry dude:)
By Grace Alone chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Wow! I love it! Great writing!
Stained Canvas chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
Wow, that's really good. I luved it!
Cinder McKnight chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Aw, that's so sweet. Now wouldn't that suck if Artemis didn't return the feelings. lol. But of course he does. lol. :D
AgiVega chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
That was lovely... ryhmed and everything... I especially liked the last line.
Dim Aldebaran chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
Well, it's nice to poetry here. Not many at all in this fandom.

A few of the rhymes seemed forced: "All the stuff we've done together/through thick and snowy weather," "In most adventures sat beside me/A change in you I always do see", "Ever since that day we first met, When I see you a feeling I get"

Some others, on the other hand, were quite natural, like that final set. I'm not a AH shipper, but still, it's nice. Good work!