Reviews for Second Glance
KATastrofic chapter 16 . 9/26/2009
WOW!You're a better writer than me. Cain and Mina looks-ah, I mean, sounds cute together
Yours chapter 16 . 9/2/2009
I really hope that there's an animation for this story, this is a great story ! :D I love it :D
Maxene chapter 15 . 4/20/2009
I honestly can't find words to describe this fanfiction... it's so addicting! Love it! ;;)
kaori kuni chapter 15 . 9/7/2008
omg omg...

Awesome the angsty assa guy (and totally hot by the way...), the clichè with the main chac (the naivefullness of her...)...the greatness of Axis (he must be mine..totally love him) and I love Maki too...If you don't want him I would accept him happily.

Maybe a better plot...but it was great


The ending was like: "umm...damm...this needs a sequell! this cannot end right here! no..."

well. it.


Schwarz Engel chapter 2 . 9/5/2008
Not sure how intentional you intended for this to be, but I'm kinda seeing where this is going already. I don't normally like stories so opaque. /

And yet I like yours. Aside from that little bit above, good job!
Haru no hana chapter 15 . 4/25/2008
love this fic!

so cool and and...

im at a loss of words XD

well, iam here to express my opinion, so

i think your characters are amazing and well

developed, i liked the kind of humor,

it only lacked a lillte becouse of the plot

but that part you covered up with an incredible

description of the scenes n.n

i was just hoping that scarlet would end up with

maki .

i just liked him .-.

byee! \Ô/
vantwitch chapter 13 . 1/10/2008
This is a great story and all, but I just noticed something.. If Mina looked like her half-brother, the prince, why did King Tristan say she looked like her mother?
Myusi chapter 16 . 12/2/2007
I just finished this story in one sitting *-*. Whew, can you right a lot! _
Gladiaria Alata chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
http / gladiariaalata . deviantart art / RO-Cain-and-Mina-69533040

I see you haven't updated your sequel in a while. XD I hope you do! I really love reading about these characters. ;_;

Gladiaria Alata chapter 15 . 11/11/2007
Oh my god I haven't felt this completely satisifed by a fanfiction before. I found this story absolutely amazing with interesting (albeit somewhat cliched) and wonderful characters. Did I mention I probably have an assassin cross fetish? CAIN PLUSHIE PLEASE.

Anyway, I was so obsessed with this that I drew a fanart. LOL. Contact me or something if you want a link to it.
Shininku chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
I don't really know when you submitted this in, it coulda been a while from now, but it's pretty good. Nice job! :D
Isabelle chapter 15 . 6/8/2007
I likes your story pretty much, Iit's very fresh and vivacious.

A couple of points that would require completion :

1- Whats to happen with Scarlett and Maki ? this storyline was left pretty open, with the uncle of the prince and all.

2- And what about Cain and his father ? are things settled just like that of will there be a final confrontation ?

It's been a pleasure reading you !

pusakal chapter 8 . 3/26/2007
weh... pilipino ka ba?
Vylette Satine chapter 15 . 3/22/2007
So bitin! Cain...
Vylette Satine chapter 14 . 3/22/2007
Everytime I read the name 'Axis' I can't get my mind out of math... .

hehehe... I hate politics...

AT LAST! hehehe
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