|Reviews for Confusion with Love|
| OceanGoddess101 chapter 6 . 11/23/2009
something very similar like this happened 2 me cuz wat happened was, ive been living in my area since i was born and this girl jeanine moved in when we were in 3rd grade and this other kid, saul, ive known since grade 2. anyways wat happened was jeanine met me and saul and we all became frends (we also had a frend named victoria but she isnt needed here xD) and later on i started getting a crush on saul cuz when i would hang out with him ppl called us bf gf but he threatened them that he would beat them up if they said it again (he was in kick boxing and we were still in elementary) then just last yr jeanine started going out with saul and i felt kind of jealous and she was getting bitchier towards me and her emotions were getting fake and she didnt tell saul how she felt when he would hug her and talk it out like a normal couple would. then a few weeks later they broke up and even till now it painssaul just to hear anyone say her name. like i would b in a room with him and i would have 2 b careful as 2 not say jeanines name. but with jeanine it was different. (btw in elementary she was very big on lieing) with jeanine she said that it was good she broke up with him cuz she didnt like the hugging and she thought he only wanted her for sex. and we've known eachother since we were lil so i knew she was wrong. but right now... i doubt saul would ever feel something for me. i just want a chance :(
| xfirelillylovex chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
wow this is such a great story! please you have to carry on and tell me what happens next. otherwise its gonna bug me for ages. please!
| iluvSokka46 chapter 4 . 3/18/2008
OMG is this whole thing true? like did the kikyo girl really say those things?
omg i can't believe that. im pretty much speechless...okay not really.
| MissMiniMunchkin chapter 6 . 1/20/2008
awz...ur life was soo difficult. but i enjoyed every since letter of it. )
| MissMiniMunchkin chapter 4 . 1/20/2008
did she really talk about that?
| MissMiniMunchkin chapter 3 . 1/20/2008
it is interesting...mine has 2 be boring. im a nobody. urs is a high school drama. cheer up!
| Kouga's Archi chapter 6 . 1/19/2007
why not do a sequel?
| inukag4ever181 chapter 6 . 7/25/2006
that's a sad story. that even made me want to throw up!
| rachel chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
I love your stories. I've already read all of them. You are a very good writer. Well please update soon. Can't wait.
| TemmY chapter 2 . 5/7/2006
hey... i have only made it to the second chapter... but i just thought i would let you know that the tampon thing was priceless... i loved it... it sounds just like me with my one friends... his sister is shameless and all of us use it against him... i yelled at him down the hall one day to get me a tampon at random. the best part was that it was in front of the popular scum of our school... ya... you probably didnt care to listen to my story. but its my way of saying that i appriciate the fact that your story is real and people can relate in one way or another... i cant wait to read the rest... you know... i dotn think i will... im off
| Ultima6788 chapter 6 . 4/15/2006
Good story, if you can, keep this thought in mind: "the human mind can think of far more destructive thoughts when alone than when said person is surrounded with friends, family, or acquaintances." If this is your life, you should keep always keep moving forward, because if you stop, you may never move again. lol, other then that not bad.
| lalalalala chapter 4 . 4/11/2006
is ur friend megan completly taking about this stuff everyday! damn ur unlucky i guess u have talkshow porn 24/7
| TurtleHugs chapter 6 . 4/10/2006
did u really stop hanging out with Chris bc of Megan?
| Rikaku chapter 6 . 3/26/2006
That... that... b* witch "Kikyou"! WTF? I hate people like that, and like you, I generally don't hate anyone (extreme dislike, but not hate). I know someone who is going through what you are, but she and her girlfriend (they finally got together, and yes, my friend is bi) might have to split up for good becuase the girlfriend is moving.
I find that Kikyou is being very... disturbing... Is the person you based her off of really like that? I'm a freshman in high school, and no one I know is that bad, and trust me, there are lots of bad people. They talk about sex like it is the blue sky, but they try not to damage the innocent. I'm finding that "Kikyou" is seeming like quite the sex-addict. Yuck.
I got really mad at the parts when "Kikyou" was so blatantly cheating on "Inuyasha" and the poor guy didn't know. Did this seriously happen? I'm not questioning the truth of this story, but you did base it off of your life, and I was simply curious. Curiousity killed the cat, I know... but I'm not a cat; I'm a wolf.
In my opinion, I don't think that people really have an "ugly side" but they simply choose to show one of their traits more than the other. In all respect to those who know me personally, I try to keep true to who I am and not hide the "ugly things" like loving violent video games, watching the Martix (competely through), and still loving to watch Arthur and owning Care Bears. I doubt that there are some people who are truely as nice and innocent as they put out as a front - they're usually the people who know the most about life because they listen. Your story seems very realistic in that sense, and I like that. Trust me, my story sucks, and I'm currently stuck on the fifth chapter...
So... I just wanted to drop you a line that I love all of your stories and wish that I could review more often, but school been clubbing me down. You have excellent description, but I would like to advise you that there are a few places where your words run together a bit. Nothing big, but I just thought you'd like to know.
I hopoe your life is looking up, because no one in the world should have to suffer, even though many are. I hope that listen (er.. reading) my long review on your story has somehow brightened you day, because I understand that life is not peaches and flowers, but there are things that redeem it.
Also... I know what you mean about people in the desert not caring about fashion! I live in Tuscon, and here, we don't give a d* about what we wear or how thin we are. We just kinda throw stuff on and hope for the best. Quite a few time, the boys in my class have come to school without thier hair combed, and these are the A students!
So, in end to my stupidly long review, I express my appreciation for living your life and writing your stories. I hope it gets better, and you get the boy you like. To brighter days and whenever you can update. I should go now and write my story huh...?
PS. That was long... but I don't think I've said how much I want to get a shot gun and shoot "Kikyou" have I?
Staff of please don't take me seriously, okay? (Rikaku is being safe than sorry)
| HalfBlackWolfDemon chapter 6 . 3/24/2006
Damn. I would go completely nuts. Hope u r okay, chicky. But, I luved it none the same. Hope to read more of your stories soon!