Reviews for Looking For My Duckie
Darking Girl chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
hahahahahahahaha! That was so funy! A duckie! hahahahaa
B3B3 Lik You chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
WHAT? I wanna say I'm rather confused and thought that whole thing was ludicrous and totally unneccssary. But what I'll really say is...that was entertainment lol. I don't know how or why, but it was entertainment.
Aly the Spy chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Oh where is my duckie,

Oh where is my duckie,

Oh were oh where oh where oh where!

Is my duckie!

wigitdog chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
SpookyLola chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
I think you know my name. Probably not for a good reason. Anyway, after reading this I think it is totally pathetic of me to judge you as a serious writer, so I'll give a go at writing less abusively.

1) Mildely amusing, I suppose I would agree. Though it sort of wears out towards the end and gets rather annoying.

2) If you are going to rhyme, rhyme less as though you are being forced to type because a chainsaw is being held horizontally over your head. Or just don't rhyme. Unless of course you are rhyming in oprder to be funny, in which case

3) Maybe perhaps there is not enough force of humour. Perhaps some form of ridiculous tensionetc.

Have to finish now.


I did not use enough abusing language. ( I did not have time.)
Thayet1231 chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
i like it! very origional~!
WhyshouldItellyou chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Captain Cheese chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
lol ...
The Squash chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
It's funny! It's random! It's meaningless! I love it!
rhiawoods chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
You never put who the song belongs to. Did you have to read 1984?
Abiona Marchand chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
It was good, although not as funny as the other ones. Great job!
hail flying spaghetti monster chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
crazy you idiot. where r u . don't run away and leave me
Madame-S-Butterfly chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
heh, looking for his duckie! T'was funny!

killing you with umbrellas chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
insanity. awesome. ur story was just wat i needed to cheer me up. thanx.
EAngeL1 chapter 1 . 1/27/2006

I admit, Jon is stubborn and just odd at times, but this is an INSULT. KILL THE FREAKIN' INSULT NOW.
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