Reviews for Renegade Weyr |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know the feeling, being buzy. Great story. Overal I am enjoying this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Sorry about the short feedback, its late I'm getting sleepy, and I was looking over this, one thing about the idea of the weyrlings and weyr kids, good idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry about taking so long to get back to this story. Its has been zany, Moving, computer crashing, and real life, has been keeping frim get back to this story. Overall great story, I hope you can continue on with this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I adore this fic, it is just absolutely fascinating! _ Keep up the great writing! Faia Sakura |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't find the latest chapter boring at all. Meanwhile... What's with the weakwilled WeyrWoman! Not to mention the Gold who lets herself be pushed around by a pair of males when she was at the Gather? Keep up the story. Can't wait for our favourite BrownRider to set her straight! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heya, LV3950... I went ahead and fixed that typo. Sometimes I guess I get so excited about writing that I type the wrong words without realizing it. Ops :D And, Rivka Kahian, thank you for the wonderful review. That really made my day! More chapters to come soon! |
![]() ![]() hm, N'kar isn't the only one wondering what going to happen next... The only thing I still remember is in the fourth to last paragragh "tell him the through and not lie..." Seems like there were one or two other similar mistakes, but I don't remember where. Other then that, wonderful chapter, as always, and I'm loving the frequent updates! |
![]() ![]() I've been fallowing this story from the beginning. I really like the story and love that this is a multi-tier tale. It isn't flat like most. I believe that if you get an idea you could write an original book that would be just as great as Pern. Good luck and please continue to write. |
![]() ![]() Two updates in one week-you're spoiling us :) Wonderful. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're evil. first it's short, then you end it like that? arg! Don't keep us waiting for too long this time. Please? And wonderful job, as always. Only one thing I remember clearly: N'kar suspected that he was more relieved at a break in the montany of sweep riding, You forgot an o in monotany. Don't worry, we all do it. At least it was just a letter and not a whole word :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent plotline, evil cliffhanger. Add more anytime soon? I really like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi just read your story so far I like it. I do hope you write more chapters soon. I would like to know what happen to Kayta. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very nice story. I hope you update it soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Arg! After that whole long wait, you had to leave it there? You little... -Reader takes a breath, counts to ten- Good to have you back though. updates are always nice, even if they are shorter then we would like. |
![]() ![]() This is a very good story with unusually vivid characters, but what I really like is that you obviously took the time to read it over and improve it. So many people don't, and you can tell. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay kids, play nice... I for one love it. It's an awesome idea, and I love the problems you're creating, the issues that this weyr is facing. Will they get found out? will the holders all rebel? Keep it coming! |