|Reviews for Finally over|
| carolquin chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
hey,is this a one shot or is there more to this? this could be the start of a good story.
| Ginny278 chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
good story i liked it please continue
| WutevaChica chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
WHOA! Way too short! Keep going,
| lily 101 chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
i loved it really did buti hope you make it a two-shot!
| Amaherst chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
Good so fa but please continue it, it needs to be loads longer.
| BasilioBoy777 chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
Hey, me again. Once again, good but repetitive and short. All of these one shots you do seem to follow the same continuity. I think you should remake them into a single story. That way, it would add length to them and greatly increase your credibility as a writer. All of these stories appear to follow the same basic plotline; it's like watching Pokemon or Power Rangers or something. You know what I'm talking about. Write something else for a change; vary your style a little. Try a Ron/Hermione ship tale; you seem to specialize in ship stories. Or maybe another one set in the Maruaders' era, or an action tale about how Harry went old school on Voldemort, etc. You're doing alright, but now you're starting to flounder. Give it another go, but this time, with more feeling.