|Reviews for A Dried Crimson Rose|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
Yep no matter what Christine and Eric for always and forever
| amandab821 chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Wow. All of your stories all Leroux based. Although, you really shouldnt make Erik seem creepy in everything. I think you should make him just a bit better. Like in the end of the Leroux book, after being on Raoul's side the whole time, I felt sorry for Erik again.
| Hope chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Loved it. Very Leroux.
| Almadine chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
It's me, from LJ _ Love the idea. A couple of constructive criticisms:
1) You change tense from past to present; example: "Everything IS starting to clear", (present) next to "I RAN forward" (past).
2) In 9 lines you use "Oh!" about 4 times - thats almost every other line . Example: "Oh, what a beautiful voice!". Next line down : "Oh what a sight"! I know you're trying to write a distinct style, but be careful of repetitions.
Otherwise, good story _ And I might critique some of your others later, mwahahahahaha!
| thiswaybecauseofjacob chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
wow, i really enjoyed that! very creative, very dark but still romantic! i loved it!
| Thai Libre chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
Oh that was sad and good at the same time. and a dit creepy. Keep Writing! :)
| MasqueradingThroughLife chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
O-o-o-oh...*shivers* I like it. I like it very, very not only stay true to the characters, you also stay true to the mood Leroux set in his book. I not only like, I love!
I look forward to seeing more of your work around these parts...