Reviews for Between Love and Redemption
Galenchia chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Liked the ambiguous ending. :3 Yay.

amaya59 chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Wow for this very short story, you packed a lot of thought and emotion into reflection,regret,sorrow,guilt and the human need to feel something even if it takes one to a person whom otherwise would not be a consideration. It moves a little fast but does convey many heartfelt feelings about failing, wanting to die for failing and needing to connect to someone anyone to ease the pain of such job. Cloudfan wrote a story called living in darkness(was taken of deviantart)it is very good. I think she is on adultfanfic under squallfan.I'll check,I have the story saved on my computer if nothing else. I can send it to you if you is longer but it is much like yours.
naruto0616 chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
Wow, that was awesome, but I don't really get the ending.

Could you please explain, if you want.
Sukidayo17 chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
O.O... W...O...W

I really don't know what to say. I cryed.
RaeaInEden chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
i could feel it.

i could feel his pain.

this is the mark of a truly gifted writer.

its like i was there.

like i was him.

i salute you!



awesome work, keep writing :]]
Deletedaccountk chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
Wow. Very dark. o, Edo dies, eh? D
Roy-Fan-33 chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
Yay! Another great fic! _ Wow, Ed's feelings are really strong.(But try using more powerful words) I absolutly love it, so update soon. (EVIL CLIFFHANGER!)

_ (Sorry if I sounded rude!)

Aleshyx chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
I can't believe that no one has reviewed this story! It's beautiful and full of emotion!