Reviews for Tears To Shed
GirlX chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
I liked this very much,you got Emily perfectly. You also have a very good writing style that I like very much. It's a verynice story.
Weetzie06 chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
This was a great read! Your writing is so much more mature than most Corpse Bride stories. Now I have to see what else you've done :)
WallofIllusion chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
I finally saw Corpse Bride last night, so I can finally come read this w

This is so sweet _. Poor girl. The first line is a great introduction.
Daricio too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
_ aw...

*has FINALLY watched Corpse Bride and lurfed it* _ Is all WAI and stuff!

... and... stuff!

XD I feel dumb at the moment, don't mind me.
PlayerPiano chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
I think that this is a brilliant character piece. This paragraph:

"A very strange thing happened then to Emily – she began to cry. She wept for the house they would’ve built together and the child they would’ve had together, and she wept in anger, too, because he had taken all these things from her; she wept for the lives he may have destroyed in the same way."

Was perfect. I think you captured the way Emily must have felt beautifully. You didn't make it melodramatic or hysterical, and I really appreciated that-a more human sense of shock, betrayal, sorrow, and anger comes through here.

A great piece. :)
Elwing-Evenstar chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Aw, how sweet and sad... poor Emily! I can just imagine how she feels, waiting for someone to promise to love her... Awesome story!