|Reviews for The Kid|
| blazingfire33 chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
i licked it, the problem was it was TOO short... even though your 11 im 11 and i write 20 times longer stories. although i did admire it... GOOD 5/10
| Dark Master 1988 chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
Pretty cute fic. I think a story being written a long time ago is better off as is. Just shows how much you've progressed over the years.
If I were that kid, I'd be scared too if Kintaro broke down my door and started pummeling me. However, I'd be pretty amazed at the same time, because MK II is the best MK game of all time, in my opinion.
All in all, a pretty cool fic. (Gives thumbs up.)
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
very humorous and ps: I was not advertising my fanfic...
| Little Foxx chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
This isn't bad, I enjoyed reading it. I love your imagination at this age. Do you have any more stories?