|Reviews for Puzzle Man|
| Christiangirl chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
This was a great story! You wrote Grissom very well and true to his character, just as the CSI creator/writers had designed him. I loved the shyness of Grissom, as that was an excellent added touch! Keep upthe great work!
| SevernSound chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Now I recognize the writer.
| VegasGoddess chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
OH. MY. GOD. Have I actually not reviewed this! It's been on my favorites for years; I even got my mom to read and review it! It's absolutely perfect. There are no words to describe it. I mentioned this story in another review a million years ago. Yay for free publicity! lol :D
I just reread it again, and was squealing the entire way through, just like I do when I watch the old seasons and they have their moments. YOU ARE AMAZING! Good god I can't get the grin off of my face. Thank you for being perfect!
| My Kate chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
just found this story...what a great read...you've gotten the characterizations perfect...great A/U...really enjoyable...looking forward to reading more of your work...
| SylvieT chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Just found your story by chance, it's excellent and so funny and did I need a good laugh today. I'll put it in my favourites so I can read it again when Grissom's left! Sniff, sniff.
So unexpected and unusual it was a breath of fresh air. Thank you.
| caz1969 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Fantastic, loved it from start to finish
| JellybeanChiChi chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
Fourth time reading this. Still makes me laugh. Jess is my hero. But I have to ask, is she originally from Boston/Northeast? Since she described the storm as a "wicked storm." Just caught that this read around. Made me laugh. Thanks for the great story.
| WhiteWingeDove chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
Wow! That was a great story. Very interesting that it was from a POV of a charcter you created. Jess was funny and smart and sassy. Perfect for your story. And it was also very interesting how you had Grissom behaving behind the scenes. I never pictured him as the type to get drunk around others. I figured if he'd get smashed, it would probably be at his townhouse or somewhere more private. So that was also very original. A very good switch from most fanfics. Well done!
| jenstog chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
This story so owns! I can only dream to be as imaginative as this. I swear I can visualize everything about Jess and the diner. Thank you for writing & sharing :)
| Quill-32 chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
A wonderfully fresh look at the GSR, very humorous and touching. Jess is quite a real character, and it's great to perceive the geeks through her eyes, to be frustrated and amused along with her. Lovely!
| sam chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
What an amazing story. I love the outside perspective and most of all, the great voice that you have going. Love it, love it, love it.
Thank you so much for writing this great story!
| maraworkhard chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
loved it from every angle
| toothchick chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Great story! Creative POV! As I was reading, I was trying to figure out in the CSI timeline where the story was. (the loud diners after his surgery for his hearing...) No fair throwing in the bipass surgery-
I found this story because anthor author listed it as a favorite...now I will check out the rest of your work. Thanks for the fics.
| MC New York chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
By any chance, have you ever met my Aunt Jenny? Because your character Jess is pretty much my aunt in a nutshell! Except, more city woman attitude. Not country. :)
This story was impressive. Beyond impressive actually. I can't describe. Your character had a voice of her own and I love how you incorporated her. Perhaps my favorite line/lines in this?
[“I set her straight. I told her about our torrid love affair and our secret love child. I even offered to introduce her to Charlie, but she seemed really upset about that. She kind of drove off in a huff.”]
[I got defensive. “You’d better start talking or I’ll have to tell Sara where you are the next time she comes looking for you in my diner.”]
[A blonde with big boobs and a lifetime investment in Botox shot me a weird look right before I was shuffled into Conrad’s office.] - Well gee... Wonder who THAT could be.
[I rumpled up my hair a bit and I tried to think of the most depressing thing in my life at that moment. My credit card bill payments came to mind, and I was in character by the time I reached the receptionist’s desk.]
[I thought about when my cat died, when my mom died, and how I’d never, ever have enough money to buy a Lambourghini.] - I know how she felt on that last one.
I had a LOT of favorite lines, to be truthful. I loved this story, there's no other way around it. I want to marry it. Can I have the right to marry a story? Please?
Masterpiece right here. I'll tell you that much. I may throw some stories into my favorite pile on a limb, but this deserves to go in with HONORS. H.O.N.O.R.S.
Peace out, one love,
MC New York
| Mindy chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
Wow! That was really something special!