Reviews for Spiral
shetan83 chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
I enjoyed this. Very Noir, with the action and Kirika's mysterious appearance.
LucyEllis chapter 1 . 7/16/2007

really really creat!

so good!

update soon

and please don't forget about us

i want more more more!

Ruka-chan1980 chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Great Noirfic! Im at a loss of words!


Keep writing!
Tzarista chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Meiriona chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
m/k yay.

DarkFeenix chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
Uh... wait, this isn't a oneshot, is this? Anyway, a wonderful fic. You made up entire OC family, and made it beliveable. Uhm... this is kinda rare but I have nothing to complain at all about this fic. I guess I'll be here gaping till you either give this thing 2nd chapter, or write more Noir. I've been wondering for a while how well you'd do in Noir, since you wrote pretty impressive azumanga ficlets, and you seemed to like Noir. Oh well, I guess I won't have to guess about that anymore ~_~

keep up the good work

xiar chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Good stuffs!1 Will there be a sequel?
22671991 chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Only bad thing I have to point out is that you need to watch your spelling mistakes, or get a better spellchecker, or recruit a proof-reader. Besides that minor problem:

Holy freaking crap this is good stuff.
Dragontiger96 chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
very interesting...i rather enjoy your writing style so far
Namura chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
a little bit of action, by the end of the weekend, it's truly great, really, i'm wondering of a previus chapter that explain the shot or something like that, a fight, perhaps kirika remembering of what happend...

in the end a good chappy

luck, bye