|Reviews for Sparkling Stars|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/27
Really though, th I was good! Very good! Why are there not more reviews praising this work of fiction?
| sky75 chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
I really liked your story and your subject - Cringer was always my favorite. :) The only suggestion I have - you have this in the beginning:
"I feel a gentle breeze whip around me"
Whipping seems to imply a more forceful wind which is kind of at odds with a gentle breeze. But other than that the story is great!
| mystlady chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
nice one shot, Ashley. LOL. You should do Madame Razz (I think that's her name).