Reviews for Joined by Shadows
Jay chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
I actually thought this was a great story. I know it wasn't the happy ending many hope for, but it was really good. I especially liked that you pretty much copied the beginning, but showed how Kagome responded differently. I must admit though there is a part of me that hoped he'd step in to save her.
Dark Kora chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
You know, I actually like a story like this it makes it more interesting in a way but I will never be able to write it like this I thinks you should write a sequel to this cuz I think it would be a perfect scene to see how the rest of it turns out with what he does from there :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
This is a very beautiful piece. One of the best I have ever read, I had tears in my eyes.
Draenator chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
And history repeats itself…
Silverstarlet chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Good story, i really liked it, it was orginal and a nice read.

SilverStarlet.
Skyrere chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
Bravo! Well done. XD
endstart chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I...I don't know what to say. I'm speechless. This was well-written and just absolutely amazing. I actually love the OOCness. I have to say, probably my favorite Inuyasha fanfic ever. Or maybe even just my favorite fanfic.
thayet9 chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
That was really deep;inuyasha seemed a little ooc at the beginig but you cleared that up nicely. Great fic can't wait to read more!
TheDarkestDaisy chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
crying
Lost Soul xXx chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Beautiful, just beautiful, i didnt think she was going to truly die in the end but she just would have been kagome if she gave into the devil would she, a small part of me wanted her too, seeing as the pairing was inuyasha and kagome and we all know their love for each other, i do like how youve portrayed inuyasha as something darker and more sinister, and not as naive as the inuyasha we know, i thought it was a little dissapointing how his love for her was always based aropund Kikyo and did want to see some love develop for who she was, but none the less a beautiful and tragic story, i also loved your salem and teh crucible theme around it, a good idea and setting for the story.
DemonWolf chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
This story has to be one of the darkest stories I've read on fanfiction about Inuyasha. I agree with the others in saying you absolutely got the character of Kagome. Kikyo was ooc, and so was Inuyasha, but it fit with the plot. At the end I do believe Inuyasha did love her... The way he talked seemed sad to me.

But that's just how I think it was.
IrisAyame chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Wow! You've chosen to end it so sadly! I thought he was going to rescue her! (how naive!)

I enjoyed reading this short story! Thanks
BAsupporter chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Okay as a whole I like the story there are just a couple of things that bothered me such as this bit ''nails drifting idly down her curled back. They sketched tiny pentagrams upon her dress.''... I understand that in this Inuyasha is bascially the equivalant of the devil but he would NOT be sketching pentagrams on her dress as the pentagram is not a satanic symbol it was only portrayed as such by the church originally it was a pagan symbol used in centering power which granted can be used for evil but is not inately evil the pentagram is often used for protection I jsut wanted to inform you of this misunderstanding and I would appreciate it if you would use it in its proper context in the future as portraying it as a devilish symbol really offends me.
animegurl7137 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
oh my god that was so sad i almost cried. god how could you write something like that. :( soo sad. i loved reading it tho but still. i do NOT like the picture that is in my head of inuyasha right now. :( .WOW ok im good, now i need to go read some major fluff story to make me feel better. lol
Harvest x Moon chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
That was incredibly dark and delicious. I was begging for Inuyasha to save her, but it would not have worked, I suppose.

I, too, liked the pet names. I wanted them to have real love and I wanted him to save her for the happily ever after!

The circular structure is so perfect for this, and the differences between Kikyo and Kagome were so clearly delineated...

I just generally loved this, and I think it works well as a oneshot.
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