|Reviews for On the Wings of a Blackbird|
| awesomelyons chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
| hopelane chapter 1 . 8/26/2015
please update this
| BlackJackBJ chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Please update soon...
| kris937 chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
I wished you made more chapters, this looks really good.
| PiptheSnake chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
I'd beta, if you'd like. Please continue
| light ladybug chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
hmm, i do wonder what your going to do next?
| averyana woods chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
| badaxx1723 chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
on jesus please update. i like it no love it
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
i loveed the chapter.
what made you decide that snape should make harrys name as Xachary Ebony Snape?
either way it is an awsome name.
but what happens next?
does Xachary have a scar?
why did snape take him in?
And when will i find out the answers to my questions?
please put on at least another two chapters.
| REMEMBER101 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
i hope you post more soon
| DarkFlameInfernal chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
| Mick-Ann chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Plzz update this.
| Griffin Raven chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Despite everything both James and Lily, would have been forced
to pay more attention to Jakob the supposed BWL, as would the press...which wouldn't have been a particularly happy enviro-ment for his twin Harry. Harry may have grown up being pushed aside/or simply overlooked. Although both James and Lily might
not have behaved this way intentionally but a child often does
notice more than adults ever believe they do...so its possible
that as a child Harry, might have noticed that adults were more interested in his twin brother than him, which could lead
to resentment, anger or even bullying by Jakob!
Whereas if Harry...(cough, sorry) Xachary grows up with Severus
he at least will have the full attention of an adult upon him.
But how will Severus hide the truth from everyone and exlain just how he suddenly as a 15mth old baby to care for and the fact that said baby looks like James & Lily? Or will Severus
give young Xachary a blood adoption potion...or perhaps you have something else planned...I eagerly await to find out?
In regards to the story and if you should jump ahead to when Xachary's 11yrs old...personally I like a little detail of his childhood at say 5yrs or 9yrs...just to explain/or show just
how Severus has raised the boy or how he's educated him, but also who Xachary's childhood friends are...to demonstrate just
what type of boy young Xachary is when he finally receives his
Will Severus be employed at Hogwarts or will he sell his potions privately? Will he educate his new son Xachary himself, or hire a tutor or perhaps send him to a magical primary school or a muggle one?
| Unico Luna Angelo chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
new chapter? ;~;
| Lady Oblivious chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Please update soon! love the story, only I think it'd be better if you split it into more paragraphs, it'd be easier to read. Awesome plot, only I'm still wondering why he had to kidnap Harry...they didn't mistreat him after all. Or else I'm guessing Voldemort wouldn't even suspect the real "boy-who-lived" to be living with snape.