Awww, this is brilliant. It's almost...innocent. Well, as innocent as Jack and Roger can get. Brilliant job!

Awesome job! That was well-written!

VERY nice. My only complaint is that it was... slightly OOC. Jack wouldn't admit that he AND Roger got the power together, IE, when Roger said Jack "had done it" he would have agreed. Also, Jack wouldn't be shocked when Roger kissed him, because they had already let go of all society's old rules.

Other than that, beautiful fic. Goes beyond most LotF fics. The descriptions are gorgeous.

Faved. :P

Yay! Double digits! I'm the 1oth reviewer~*dances*

I absolutely love you. At this point, though they had changed and their hearts had hardened considerably, they were still a little bit innocent. Still young. I love the cuteness of it, but it's still a good, mature theme to a degree. Excellent job, and kudos, as this is my absolute favourite pairing for this book.

That was so adorable :)

aww, its kind of cute in angsty sort of way. i liked it.

Amazing story! I love your writing! Beautiful, striking opening paragraph... your descriptions are pure poetry. Nice tie-together of the plot and character slash-potential... :) Awesome work!

Cute! Very cute! I loved it! Jack/Roger fics are really awesome, but no one writes them! I hope to read more from you in the future!

I rate this 5 stars. D!

Most awesome. Fits perfectly.

So cute. I love this.

Aww! _ I love that book and love what you did to those two!

Yay! I love this! Thanks for sharing :D

Excellent! The world needs more Jack-Roger fics. I especially liked this one because it was so realistic - there's hesistation and a sense of unsureness that really makes this one stand out.