Reviews for The Calm Before the Storm
Guest chapter 4 . 6/2
oh damn!
Netchka3 chapter 4 . 4/30
Oooooooooooooh Now is Harry a good guy or is he not? You can't really tell. :) ;)
novonia chapter 4 . 2/19
would love to see where this is going, it doesn't seem finished
bleeb90 chapter 4 . 10/9/2014
"We guard you while you sleep. Do not...fuck with us." A bit of a fight club feeling when Harry confronted Snape. I liked it.
moonprincess97524 chapter 4 . 5/1/2014
Oh this is just to wonderful for words, have to say I do wish for more.
darkdranzer chapter 4 . 3/14/2014
...hmm i dunno the way this was done left a rather sour/unpleasent/annoyed feeling at the ending

And i doubt snape would just submit like that
Noble Korhedron chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
"Snape pulled up his sleeve to gaze on the jagged flaming green lightening bolt adorning his left forearm and began to laugh, dark or light he was well and truly screwed." OH YEAH! *EVIL GRIN*
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
SUCK. IT. UP, Snapey-Wapey! :-D
Miriam1 chapter 4 . 7/31/2013
It occurs to me that if Snape was just a decent man and would have left well enough alone, Harry would not have bothered him.

But no. Severus intended to treat the Potter children with the same prejudice he treated Harry. And Harry will not stand for that. The only reason Harry had to undergo Snape's abuse was that no adult cared enough to stop him.

Harry not only cares, but he has the power and the means to prevent the abuse. Giving Severus the benefit of the doubt didn't work. Treating Severus as a Dark Lord would (regardless of WHAT Harry may or may not be, and that isn't at all clear, here) be the only language the Potions Master seems to understand.

This is a unique solution. Very interesting, and very well done.

Sincerely,
Miriam
Starfox5 chapter 4 . 6/20/2013
Oh, very nice set up. Poor Snape!
Moonlit Wave chapter 4 . 6/7/2013
what wouldn't I give for this delightful piece of insanity to be updated beyond this point
GuidingHand chapter 4 . 5/27/2013
War does usually result in an increase in babies. I like how you used that fact and how all of Potter's children picked their houses.
Saint Snape chapter 4 . 11/22/2012
Yikes, poor Severus. He just goes from one captivity to another. This Harry is scary. And he is right - he is totally screwed. Harry will take over the world and no one will even know until it's too late. Only Severus knows and no one will believe him. Good story.
Runecutter chapter 4 . 5/9/2012
Hmmm i start to see a pattern here... you have brilliant ideas for short stories or starting chapters and then when you go to flesh it out you get as easily distracted from your original story line as the dog in "Up!"

"Squirrel!"

;)

On the other hand... Harry is self assured, confident, powerful and does not like anybody coming across his women... no need to be dark for that and i actually think the lightning bolt a nice touch.

Hmmm... with the right planning and lots of work this could actually become the seeding grain for a LARGE, funny and awesome story about the Potter spawn terrorizing Hogwarts, the Potter clan cleaning out the stiff and selfloving pureblood moron traditions and generally Snape having a miserable existence in the Gryffindor-brave new world ;) But then... your style feels more like you like to play with ideas, write around some things and when you get bored like to give them up and leave a pretty ruin of a nice little story possibility around... at least rather than putting down a real plot first and get your chapters and additional ideas step by step.
Runecutter chapter 3 . 5/9/2012
Come on... they're clearly playing with Sevvys head! why would they be so OBVIOUS about it if they were really demon spawn? And with those mothers, how could Demon!Harry ever hope to make any evil plans? :D
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