|Reviews for Left In Ruins|
| Desert Lynx chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Beautiful. This definitely fits her character well. Maybe someday she will ascend and be with them again.
| D the Stampede chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
This is an excellent one-shot, a pity it's so overlooked. It's in my favorites, btw.
| alleycat1312 chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Nice, very nice.
I really enjoyed reading this fic. I myself am very fasicinated by the relationship Samus and the CHozo have, and I explored it alot in my story "A Moment's Silence". So reading another person's take on it is both refreshing and insightful.
You created some great visuals in this oneshot. But be careful with the tense you are using. In the middle of this story, "Almost shaking with fury...that fire", you switched tenses, and that can be confusing to your readers.
Samus's entire emotional state was real and, I think, true to her character.
I especially liked when you had Samus close her eyes because she couldn't take it any more, that was a really good visual.
I am interested in what you mean by the Chozo "ascending". Is that some term for death, is a full ascension of the body...?
Anyway- this was a good story, and will go on my favorites list.