Reviews for What is Right: Year One
Ignis Caelum chapter 1 . 1/15
Ooo. Please continue this series.
hear0fgold35 chapter 17 . 1/7
I can’t keep reading this. I can’t handle memories of torture and torturous training. Your writing is compelling but I’m crying now. I want to see if you have written anything else not in this series. Thanks.
Guest chapter 19 . 12/20/2024
Love this story. Very well done characters
dianaanne chapter 19 . 11/14/2024
Still a favorite
yuyaoddeyesdragon87 chapter 12 . 7/1/2024
I love how you did this chapter
maria.marin.magdalena123 chapter 19 . 6/30/2024
I love it
CursesRevenge chapter 19 . 4/9/2024
This story is so amazing. Just plain, doggone INCREDIBLE. Some of the commenters are absolute monsters, and I am genuinely sorry that those kind of trolls are interacting with your stories. I’m sure that some of the people aren’t trying to be creepy or hurtful, but it can come across as being that way and they should try to be nicer. The whole “if you don’t have anything nice to say don’t say anything at all” philosophy. You are one of the best writers on , and your writing style is far more smooth and visually appealing than a LOT of the published works I’ve read.
Never give up hope, abandon your dreams, or pay attention to the monsters. Constructive criticism is fine, but not the ruthless screeching that’s poisoning the comments section.
Have a lovely week, and keep doing what you love! ️
Guest chapter 8 . 12/15/2023
another rebirth story where there is only pain, angst, and memories not being able to be kept with even occlumency. No revenge taken by hero. No lesson learnt by his original life. He still uses stunners. Not a good story
Millie072 chapter 6 . 9/4/2023
What do I think? A well written deftly plotted story I haven't read yet. Hooray! Not a new author, a new story. This Harry is realistic enough to slip up occasionally and able to hide it with a believable reason. He is smart enough to build a different persona than the BWL that is expected. Deciding to make Snape an ally might have been the smartest thing he could do. Great story. Thank you.
ApatheticEntity chapter 14 . 8/25/2023
I’m very quickly coming to hate this story
ApatheticEntity chapter 13 . 8/25/2023
I knew that snape was going to do that but it still pisses me off. What a complete violation of trust. I honestly can’t stand when stories constantly allow characters to berate, blackmail, and otherwise betray trusts of the main character because ‘they’re worried about him’.
aGnamZer0 chapter 19 . 6/26/2023
I wonder if Dumbledore is really ignorant (doubtful) or if he actively hides the information about Harry's years of abuse (most likely to shape him into the perfect martyr).

While I understand the want to have something solely to him, wouldn't it be more comfortable to go crash to Grimmauld Place? It does need some freshing up, but besides that it's spacious, secured behind heavy wards and has a large library.

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 18 . 6/26/2023
Huh... Not out of his own abilities (we can thank Fawkes and the Centaurs), but Harry did manage to avoid getting kidnapped and got the advantage over Voldemort. It should count I guess.

Harry complaining to Remus that his dad is grounding him. So cute!

That being said, I agree with him. It's unfair that the professors (read here Snape) only worry about him now that he's twenty and never bothered to when he was actually eleven.

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 17 . 6/26/2023
Smeltings, huh? Don't tell me Remus is tutoring Dudley? I mean, he would have figured by now who he is for Harry, right? Right?!

Wow! Severus is totally becoming an overprotective dad, constantly watching over Harry. It's so cute! And bergh, cute in relation to Severus, where's the world heading to?

Harry's starting to slack, indeed. For him to be taken down unaware like that, it's quite disappointing considering the length of his training.

Thanks for the chapter.
aGnamZer0 chapter 16 . 6/26/2023
If Ron is reacting weirdly, it maybe means he's under Quirrellmore's imperius or something, no?

Level 2 and 3 restricted spells, huh? I wonder what organization are those who trained Harry from. Definitely not the Order and certainly not Aurors. If I had to bet, I'd say Hit Wizards or most likely, Unspeakables.

Didn't expect Harry to tell EVERYTHING to Remus. Remus is one of the characters I dislike the most in Harry Potter (though, ironically, his son Teddy is one of my very favorites even if I never read the epilogue).

Thanks for the chapter.
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