Reviews for What is Right: Year One |
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![]() ![]() Sorry. Didn’t mean to post the last one. While it’s the end of the year, it felt a bit underwhelming at the end. I wasn’t expecting super fantastic crazy things but it just felt like you cut it off. |
![]() ![]() Dude, it’s not a completed story. You suck |
![]() ![]() ![]() While I'm enjoying this fanfic, I think it would have made more sense if old Harry had somehow appeared in Young Harry's mind and dumped all the memories on him. This is not a battle hardened, traumatised, PTSD adult Harry. This is clearly a 11 yo, traumatised, weak and child-like, abused 's not enough to say that other characters find him strangely grown up if he acts like an 11 yo that often regresses to scared 6 yo. Plus Harry would have wasted no time retrieving at least one Horcrux, the diadem. How would he know? Easy, Voldy's voice/memories in his scar. And let Quirrell wander around and risk his life? Warrior Harry? I don't buy it. Still, cool story. I kind of re-wrote it in my mind though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its my second time reading this and I still love it! |
![]() ![]() I need say only one word: Moldewort. Although 'Vol de Mort' is French for 'Flight of Death' |
![]() ![]() I'm loving this story, confused at times but still loving it. I really like the fix-it type stories but I've not read one like this before. I laughed at the "wait at least two weeks" part of your author's note. I was thinking it was needed then as I wanted to start talking as I was reading but had to wait for the others in the house to catch up to me. I was one of the lucky ones, I stayed up all night to read. My church leader thanked me for showing up when I told him I only had 80 pages left. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really interesting and I'm looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter! I'm hoping the Malfoys can help Harry and stay in a neutral if not "good" side in regards to the war. Harry's interactions with them, Severus, and Remus are amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ch. 11 - I think he could have passed his nightmares off as visions...that he has had the same ones repeatedly his whole life - visions of what might be...what WILL be if nothing changes. That might have worked. But seeing as it is more than ten years since you have written this...ah well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, dealing with puberty again is a b**ch! Heh! Er...ch. 1 - a wonderful beginning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update your story soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() This story was great! Are you going to finish the second one of this? If you're not maybe you should let someone adopt it. But otherwise it was wonderful! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww. I just about melted into a little pile of fluff-trimmed goo inside. Chapter 9: When all the cute, sweet things happen! |