Reviews for What is Right: Year One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAAH... Ah, Snape isn't half bad if he thinks Harry takes after his mother. manners and a decent wardrobe do make a difference in how people treat you. Sad, but there it is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was so great! Thank you for sharing this with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your Snape. You did a very good job with him. Not that that is a suprise. I mean it fits your standard. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing has its own magic. Still can't figure out how you managed to make everyone dot on him in a realistic way. You are incredible good, you know that right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehe...that was unexpected, but really cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's kind of cute how the Malfoys care about him. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I truly envy you for your ability to write action. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Draco will expect it but be disappointed anyway. Wonder who trhew the chair... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, you are an amazing author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! This is awesome and you are even better for being able to write something like this. I bet you have hords of fans adoring every word you write. No, forget it, I am sure that's the case. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...sounds interesting. Hopefully he chooses Slytherin. It's always more fun if he goes to that House :-) |
![]() ![]() . . . Wait a sec. . . HE’S WRITING IN PARSELTOUNGE THAT’S FRICKING BRILLIANT XDDDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was adorable! I loved this Absolutely did, a good Snape, the lovely Nari The balance of friends between Hermione, Draco and Neville And Uncle Remus tops the cake, great end scene |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read a bunch of 'going back to fix' and this one... hi holding his friends and dying that way... I was bawling my eyes out. It was... serene. My first thought was 'get Sirius out ASAP'. but yeah, growing up all over again. Buuut, still in good standing with Fudge and the Wizarding World so GET SERIOUS AND GET SIRIUS. Can you tell I'm looking forward to that? Need to go to bed but yay! 10/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() you forgot about quotstion mark |