Reviews for What is Right: Year One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I adore this story! It's so good! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() I really love this fanfic |
![]() ![]() The idea with Harry being a seer is splendid, genius, fantastic and much more xD I truly love this fanfiction |
![]() ![]() Not to be annoying but Natale is a boy's name, the female equivalent should probably be Natalia |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh this was brilliant! I can't wait to see more of Snape! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hurrah! Harry and Remus together again! You’ve written a brilliant fic. I’ve read the revised version as well and I love that one too. |
![]() ![]() I love your Severus Snape. And your Harry, Draco and the Malfoy's. Thanks for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story! I thoroughly enjoyed it and am looking forward to reading the sequel :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww, they're all to adorable and precious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Love this idea/plot...love every word! |
![]() ![]() My, this story was amazing! The time travel theme with Harry actually having to adjust, and separate then and now? It's simply amazing! I love everything! Good job! Update when you can, I know genius takes a bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahw, this chapter is so incredibly sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I love this. I love the discuss between characters about, what Harry home life might be like and I love how he's slowly changing things. I also love the little bit of humour about Harry hair and how most characters company about it or just how try and fix it themselves. I'm also happy, that Harry not alone anymore and he has someone to talk to about what's happening and how Snape and the mafolys are worried about him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have been liking the story quite well so far. However this bit is a problem for me. If you have this massive group of magical creatures working together, why do they need Harry. They have sufficient power and knowledge to deal with Voldemort, so why don't they just do it, rather the relying on some Choosen One. It makes everything seem pointless and forced for dramatics. Now Harry isn't dealing with things because he's the one who knows how, instead it's him just because. No other reason, just because he's the hero and it's now all forced and false. |