| Reviews for What is Right: Year One |
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   reddir chapter 9 . 8/27/2016 Damit, tears in my eyes again after seeing Narcissa with a slurring Harry. Also, remarkable job with keeping the Malfoys both cultured/aristo as well as sympathetic. |
| reddir chapter 7 . 8/26/2016 Wow. You've caught me here. To see people as severe as the Malfoys actually being caring toward a child...and you brought it about in such a natural progression. |
| SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 8/25/2016 Had to give this up by chapter 12. Story's just too slow and repetitive. Harry's a bad combination of angsty and wussy. Plus there's no future, most of the good parts would be in sequels but they were abandoned. |
| Littwink chapter 7 . 8/15/2016 This chapter is so sad! I cry every time I read it. |
| Littwink chapter 5 . 8/15/2016 One of the more realistic approaches to the time traveler plot line. |
| Bill Brinkley chapter 19 . 7/19/2016 Don't know if you are still writing, but I hope you will. I just finished this story for the second time (it deserves at least 2 readings) and enjoyed it just as much. I also hope, just as much as I did the first time, that you would go back and finish your series. Thank you for sharing it. |
| Selena92 chapter 19 . 7/17/2016 Love it. Its awesome. Like the new relationship that has developed between Harry and Draco and Harry and the Malfoys in general. Very glad to see Snape in a friend position, too. Liked the fact that the creatures could feel Harry was backgreat way to introduce Remus early. A bit creepy, though, with the Dementors. I like Harry confiding in Lupin, although I wish he would also confide in Snape- can't Snape find out the truth? Glad to see that Ron's not going to be left out. Hah and Draco's not fighting with him all the time. Nice change! I admit, I was hoping for Slytherin Harry, although I do like what you did with Ravenclaw there. About the future and Harry's knowledge of it...well, he's changed quite a bit now, I wonder just how long his knowledge of future events stays accurate? I mean, it should change. A lot. Also, Voldemort...did he truly not realize Snape's true colours this time around? And if he did, will he remember? Very exited to read the sequel(s)! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/1/2016 omfg ! HEDWIG HEDWIIIIIIG BB |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/1/2016 omffffg the feels of this chapter! f*ck u! this is amazing |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/1/2016 I am now willing to change my opinion of where Harry was placed. The story is still f*cking amazing! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2016 NOOOOOOOOOO! i really really really REALLY waned him to end up in Slytherin! but not to go dark dammmmmmmm |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2016 I always go on a hunt for 'start-over fics', as i have taken to calling them, and this so far has to rate somewhere in the top 5! (I have read a TON, so this is a compliment w) I plan on abandoning my class work for this masterpiece you have made, so i'm expecting great things! XD loving it |
| peggyjolaws chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 It's great! |
| Kyralian chapter 19 . 6/15/2016 What a thrilling tale! Poor Sev, worrying all the time! Great idea about creatures knowing what wizards don't! Sad Harry keeps himself so apart from his friends... I'm off to look for the sequel! |
| synodia chapter 19 . 6/4/2016 I love this so much, it has both Snape and the Malfoys being nice, time travel, and literally everything I look for in a story! pleease update soon I'm addicted to this |